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for The Better Man

by kimisan

person Vanessa
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter, I know Rin was really hurt and all but i'm glad that she didn't let him kiss her since he said that to her and it seem like he felt obligated to do more than to do it because he wanted to him just realizeing that Kagome had said the truth and then telling Rin that Kagome was right and that he needed to remedy that is the most hurtful thing he could have said after saying he wanted to start over so i say go Rin. And don't you being giving Kurama any type of loving until he can fully explain to you why he was acting that way besides his excuse of Yusuke and her were flirting he should also tell her about how he felt when he found out about Shessomaru had her and how Shesso's possesiveness and gaurdianship of made him feel. plz tell me that type of stuff is going to show up?
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon love the story
person EatAPeach
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was freaking hilarious! Bet Kagome's going to want to kick her own ass in the morning! Oh well, everyone needs a good embarrassing drunk now and then. Nice to see Kurama do some much needed apologizing, if I were him I'd be walking on eggshells for the next, oh I don't know...forever. Anyway, great job! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
person Sayuri-chan
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...serves Kurama right. That jerk! I still can't believe how much of a...a...JERK he's being! *huffs silently* Well, going out should be interesting, just as long as Houjo doesn't show up, things will be okay--that, and I have a feelings tension is going to still be running high between Kurama and Hiei. Things need to be cleared up, and soon, otherwise, an all out brawl will most likely take place. *sigh* Well, another great chapter. Update soon! ^_~
Sayuri-chan~
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating this story. Although I read and enjoy all of your stories, I think this is my favorite. And to EatAPeach -- Koorime are all females and self-reproducing which is why Hiei is the forbidden child.
person EatAPeach
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Ah, I see said the blind man...
person Vanessa
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the new chapter. Are they going to fall them to the resterant and make some kinda sence infront of everyone. or will they have an nice calm evening?
person Vanessa
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the new chapter. Are they going to fall them to the resterant and make some kinda sence infront of everyone. or will they have an nice calm evening?
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh now thats funny. Kurama had better watch himself, it looks like he has competition now. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i love it LOL That's it Kag's, give that baka kitsune a piece of your mind. Personally if I were Rin I would have told him to go to hell and seen if Hiei really was interested. Good chapter, update soon please.