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for The Better Man

by kimisan

person Katzztar
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<<< Kurama got out and extended his hand, she ignored it and brushed past him. His nose twitched, no it had to be wrong. ///
Kurama watched her run up the steps and sniffed again. Yeah, the scent was there. Only small traces but there none the less. He wasn't sure what to make of it, surely the girl hadn't gotten aroused. <<<<<


I must give 5 +'s for thit ending for Ch.5. XD
Kurama couldn't accept thtat Kagome wasn't attracted to him but got aroused by Kuwabara!!!
I love it!!!

Keep the Kagome & Kazuma pairing, have her ignore Kurama (and Hiei) and I will be back for more!
person Katzztar
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this story is getteng even better.
I'ts nice to see a story where Koenma already knows about Kagome and her time-travels and he's protective over her well-being. Often in stories, if Koenma knows about Kagome, he wants to her to work for him. It's a nice change to see Koenma making sure she's okay.
person Katzztar
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm blushing in embarssment.
One of my reviews didn't show up.
In it, I said I have to give you 5 stars for the ending of ch.5.
Kurama couldn't believe that Kagome ignored him but got aroused by Kazuma.
I loved that, keep thepairing as Kagomehigurashi / Kazuma Kueabara and I'll be returning.
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, glad to see Kag's isn't acting like Eri is. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. Keep up the good work
person Narakus_Girl
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome you are so cool you write awsome stories update soon love this stories
person Diane
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you actually did it! Can't wait to see what you come up with. Off to shower & then edit some fics. I think I may check for updates on this before I turn in for the night.
person like_a_girl
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new pairing!! Can't wait to read more!!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ive been dieing to read a kuwa/kags fic but i never found one oh thank you soo much for started this fic if its like ne of ur other work i know ill be hooked on it for sure please please update soon^^
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it. please write lots more.
person CM
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH! Go you! I love rooting for the underdog. Heee. ANyway, Kuwabara is not such a bad catch at all; he has his honor, he tries at school (when Yusuke was a ghost) and he has some pretty neat powers even if he is a little bit slow. I think Kagome would do wonderfuo wiht him! Oh vey- there goes my straight Kag/Sess rut I'd been building. SO keep it up and stir up some Kuwa sympathy while you're at it!

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