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for The Better Man

by kimisan

person EatAPeach
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, as always! Poor Kagome really is having a rough day. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i so enjoy reading this fic i just love the idea of kuwa n kags story i cant wait to see wat the others reaction will be when they find out kags not just an ordinary girl n is as powerful as some of the demons ^^ please update soon
person Katzztar
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the denied attraction thats going on.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Yukina is. Is the 'relationship' between Yukina and Kuwabara the same as before, where she doesn't know about love and such? OR are they really together?
Hmmm Yukina never calls him Kuwabara, his family name, but Kazuma, his personal name.
If Kagome hears Yukina call him Kazuma, her pesonality would prefer to call him by name instead the family name.
Right now, I see Yukina as a big block for Kagome and Kazuma having a relationship. I can't wait to see how that happens.
All I know that with the look of adoration at the mention of Yukina, Kuwabara may be heading for a heartbreak.
Kagome can then help him.
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I get the feeling that wasn't just "nothing" on the meter that Genkai saw lol Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait to see the look on Kurama's face when she shoots him down. Poor Kitsune won't know what to make of it. Good chapter, please update soon.
person Lady Anocsona
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and hope to see more of it in the future. If it is anything like you others I'm sure that it will be great. Though you don't see many Kuwabara/Kagome stories, this one seems like it will turn out to be one of the best ones. Keep up the good work for this story and all the rest.
Your Fan
Lady Anocsona
person Ox King
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, many new chapters for me to read. Thanks.
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you for updating this story i enjoy reading this kuwa nkags fic it the only one i've seen so far it it's looking really good im soo happy that ur not just throwing them in bed together its really intresting to read please update soon
person EatAPeach
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, something tells me Kurama isn't going to fall for that. Things are about to get complicated, I can feel it! Nice work, keep it up!
person EatAPeach
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm really diggin' this story. A Kagome/Kuwabara is pretty much unprecedented, and so far you're doing well with it. Truthfully, I'm more of a Sango fan (I'm sure you've noticed this from the stories I tend to read and review), so the fact that I'm actually really enjoying this should tell you something. (Though I think it might be really cool if she made an appearance somehow and a little Sango/Hiei subplot sprung from it...*insert shameless grin to accompany wishful thinking*)...I'll read and review either way, this story is hilarious and you've got me hooked! Great job, I'll be eagerly awaiting more!

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