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for The Better Man

by kimisan

schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far, i love it. i'm surprised that sessy (or anybody else) didnt geld kurama. i was disappointed to find out that although the story is 36 chapters and hadnt been updated in a while that it is incomplete, i just assumed that such a long story would be complete. i hope you update it one day soon.
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...just when I was all caught up in the story, it stopped! Darn. Thank you for a few enjoyable hours, however! I guess I'll just have to finish it in my head. ;)
person anom
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more, it's that great of a story
person mikopunzl
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had a few doubts about this pairing, so much so that it took me a while to read it. So far so good, though. I think that this is the strangest pairing a person can do for YYH. Hopefully you'll finish this one day, cause I'd like to see a good, finished story about Kagome and Kuwabara. I love your style of writing!
person peach
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* and i thought that there was a new chapter of this wonderful fic
person willowsnap
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I just started reading you fanfiction and suprised to see such a uniq pairing. Im a big Kuwabara fan and Im happy that hes going to get the girl and not be portrayed as the ignorant idiot in a story. Please please write some more chapters.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Nefra
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I have been on the edge of my seat waiting for an update to this story. Personally I'm overjoyed that someone is finally giving Kuwabara a chance to get the girl. All in all he's not THAT bad looking, he's honorable, chivalrous and he would love any woman he ended up with unconditionally. Now tell me, who wouldn't want a man like that? Now, this whole deal with Kurama is just making me want to pull my hair out. I think Rin should shove the stick that's stuck in his ass up a little further and make him cry for Mommy. I love everyone's favorite kitsune but he's just acting like a jerk. Kinda reminds me of Inu Yasha for some reason. LOL! The scene with a drunk Kagome telling him where to go was absolutely priceless. She told him exactly what was on her mind and what he'd put poor Rin through. I'm also glad that Rin turned her face away when he went to kiss her. Of course having him want to kiss her after finding out what Kagome said would make her think he felt obligated. Plus...he degraded her in a very bad way. No wonder Sesshoumaru wants to keep him away from her. Hope you update very soon. Again, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see the conclusion to this very addicting story.

Ja ne!

Nefra
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read all your stories and this is my absolute favorite

your doing a great job update soon
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Kagome. She's going to be miserable in the morning. Hope Rin and Kurama actually try to get to know each other not just have sex. The way you developed Rin & Yusuke's friendship was nice and I think Kurama should try to get to know her better. Especially since he apologized for IF he hurt her feelings. After what he said, he should know he did. Will be watching for your next update.