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Hey I read that your having troubles writting...:(...but then i got this brilliant idea....:) and this is it I take a taszer (sp?) lock you in a room with a note book and pen and come in every half an hour and if you don't have enough done I shock you with it lol it will gradually get higher and higher lol and I can garantee you, you will get a chapter done in an hour lol.....>:) muhahahahahah.....AND if that don't work i'll be sitting in some insane asylum rocking back and forth mumbling to myself because I want to know what happends next soooo DAMN much lol. But in all seriousness I like the idea of just listening to some music...but if that don't work you can always ask some friends!!!
soooo KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls pls pls pls pls pls
I will give you a life time supply of ramen ...but i bet people have already bribed you with that lol ...hmmm maybe cookies...I don't know lol
-gothic rose.....^_^

Oh man!!! Girl!! I am so in love with this story, you're hilerious as hell and the lemons ae just yummy ^___^ pleeeaaaaase put more......i like when she fights with Raul. he he he hehe

I like Twinkelltoez idea. Bring in Sesshoumaru. Don't forget though that Inuyasha told her she needed her rest because she's going to need it. Maybe him and Sesshoumaru can have her at the same time. But, yeah, yummy Sesshoumaru. You still have Naraku to go and he has a very nice sparkly, a big one.

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And don't forget about the YuYu bunch. I love the way you can make them so funny. What have they gotten themselves into trying to find 'her'? Oh, and I'm sure that Sesshoumaru would find her ability to morph quite intriguing. His bored stare would probably piss her off. He could try to trap her with the fluff so he could inspect her closer. Her sarcastic attitude would no doubt piss him off too. That's all that I can think of for now.

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Hola! It has come to my attention that you are having a bad case of the writer's slum. I see you have tried writing naked, in your pajamas, at night, etc. ect. etc. Well i have a propositianishik for you. Have you tried writing in short shorts and a Barney outfit while doing an irish dance listening to Hit me baby one more time by britney spears all the while getting high on milk carton residue? Good Luck with that! I tried twice, ended up with blonde hair and a wedgie you can't imagine. Lovin the stories! take as long as you like...I haven't even gotten my first CHAPTER up yet..while you got..a bazillionish whatchamacallits up! Well, i'm off to morne over my lost cookie...
T-T....ha ha!! T-T's!! nyahaahhaha!!

In Memory of the best cookie in the world..we shall never forget you and your bravery to stop chickens from having sex with turtles..*Tear*

Have you tried re-reading your story while listening to some music that would set a scene to the new chappie or music that would put you in the main characters POV. That sometimes helps me ( the putting myself in the main characters pov) get a new feel for the story.

Oh Oh Oh!! I thought of something you could use in your story!! ^-^ but..i kinda forgot..something to do with sesshomaru....yeah...It was funny!...something about a "Crazy ass mother-fucker...with a tail"...and that's all i remember..or was it kouga...huh..N E Wayz what is that fluffy on Sesshomaru's shoulder n e how?...i wonder if they had condoms back then..no..or lube..well..good luck..l8erz

hey this is gothic hear and i just wanted 2 say that I LOVED CHATER 8 LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! but the problem is ive rea it like 7 times ....i just wanted 2 know if u were gonna update or if something has come up e-mail me and tell me if ya want bye!!!!!......bloodymoontears16@webtv.net

I don't know what to say to make you completely happy so......Great story, seeing as i read both of them in 2 days, damn nagging bf I would have finished earler if it wasn't for him....^.^; Sooo... Anywho... Um...* where was I again* Oh Please update. ** skips away from the computer then falls over her bf's sleeping form** Damn YOU!!!

Any new chapters on the horizon? I need my dosage.