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Sorry just thought of something...It wouldnt happen to be a big yaoi 3some between Sessy, Inuyasha and there dad would it? CUZ THAT WOULD JUST BE HOT!!!

YAY!!! And that was one heck of a chappy...I never thought that something like that would pop up. Hehehe...That was so cool! What with the different worlds and all...Your making it all sci-fi like. I love it...

*Blinks* Ohhs great chapters! I love the way you did the umm hotness between the two of them. Then how you showed Inudaddy's guilt for what he let Sesshoumaru do and what he was so close to doing!! Now who is this figure standing over Sesshoumaru.?? I don't think its Naraku, doesn't seem like his dialog, seems more like Kouga. *Swats evil cliffy* Time to drag my rock climbing gear back out---for the cliffs I will be constantly climbing back up!!

Actually, I did read the story fairly carefully, otherwise I wouldn't have reviewed. I wasn't accusing you of being a newbie, but neither am I. It's typical for stories that deal with incest for the two characters to initially have moral qualms about their new relationship, but they often amend them as soon as they are aware that these feelings are reciprocated. Sesshoumaru's, rather than Inutaishou's, sudden capitulation in chapters 3 and 4 felt awkward and unnatural to me. Chapter 5 seems to take more long-term reprecussions into account, whiich is more true to life. Also, one of my major concerns was that both characters stopped dwelling on Izayoi and Inuyasha's deaths (Sesshoumaru seemed chipper and Inutaishou tied up in his own identity crisis) post-coitus. At least this was true until the last update. Remember, I can't see what you have planned ahead.

As to youkai morality, you make a good point about the possible tolerance toward incest, though youkai tend to treat their own kind better than they do humans. Back in the Bat Demon arc, even Inuyasha was shocked to hear Shiori's grandfather murdered his own son. And man-eating wolf or not, Kouga still took great pains to protect and avenge his comrades. Hiten and Manten loved each other--perhaps incestuously! The two societies subscribe to different standards, but they both have them. However, you are right that it doesn't rule out incest.

update soon

O.k. I can't give anything constructive to add because I really liked it and I saw no obvious typo's. It's something different from the cavalcade of rape stories. I've seen a ton of rape fics and while I don't mind them, I want something different, y'know? Write more, please, when you can! ;). And *salutes* even though I like eat fast food maybe once a year if that, I will keep your request foremost in my thoughts.

First of all, demons are demons. Demons rape and eat each other and even humans as well.

Where the fuck did you get that idea?

Hello!

I'm quite intrigued by what you've got here. It's nice to see a consensual relationship between Sesshoumaru and his father. The development seems a little fast, but then again, sometimes people have a funny way of coming together in times of pain and suffering. Nice portrayal of Sesshoumaru's emotions regarding the whole situation...feeling safe to feeling rejected. And you did a fine job with his father's transition from wanting to regret and concern. It makes for a well-balanced emotional aspect of your story.

I look forward to seeing this progress further. Keep on truckin'!

definite effervescence

Sorry I havent been able to review. I just got back from vacation. I gave you an Idea? COOL! And is it Kouga by any chance...*wink*

I'm a big fan of your work! I never get to see this pairing, so thanks! ^_^ Is it Kouga? I can't wait for the next chapter!