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Yay! You responded to my rewiew...And don't worry Vivian-sama; I'm blonder than you (technically speaking, I'm a brunette but whatever) and I just noticed in my last review I spelled your name wrong (super sorry!!) and the word 'little'. Sigh. I'm such an idiot! Urg. Oh my, you finally did it...The lemonade is in the fridge! If you would pardon the pun... You spent twenty chapters creating the lemonade and adding the sexual tension that those characters sorely needed! Whee! I'm so happy that I'm estastic...er, same difference! I was waiting nearly forever for this day....Okay, maybe a week...LESS than a week! Haha~! Ooh, I wish I was brave to post on this site, but I'm always the coward! Aiyah! Well, I, for one, can't WAIT for the next chapter...I'm surprised that Hiei didn't say anything to embarrass Kagome yet! Ah, Kenshin's still the polite bishie, as always! Squee!! Wow, this review is waaay shorter than my other one, but ah well! You didn't seem to have any grammatical errors in Ch. 20, but truthfully I was waaay more into the lemon than looking for mistakes! I'm such a horrible perfectionist...Haha~! I think it would be...fun if they missed the new moon and had to stay there another year! Maybe this fiction would be the one to break the 60 chapter mark! Sigh. Such a blissful brain I have!! I look forward to the next chapter Vivian-sama, that I do~

=^~^= Thanks a Buncha for this wonderful lemon and story, Sei-san=^~^=

mmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeooooooowwwwwww. this ia a tasty fanfic. please write more. yum

oohh how i would love to be in kags position at that moment!!! plz update soon

Your Stories: Two Swords, One Heart; The path to hate; and sight of the blind are really good. I hope you are able to update them as soon as possible.

poor kagome the guys left her and had no idea that she's by herself... if i was kags id be dead by now!!! anyways im enjoying this story so i hope u update really soon.

So awesome. The boys are going to have to be really nice to make up for leaving her for so long. She'll make them pay...maybe in another way? ;) Well, I say, good story so far, mate! XD Can't wait for you to write more! Huggles,
Sayuri-chan

very good story is so amazing poor kags has to take care of herself in a world she doesnt know ne thing about just bc the two guys she helped out have the hots for her n run away great story please update soon

Hello, Vivan-sama! My name is Sei-san; I am a big fan of your writing (your quick updates spurred me to become one =^-^=) ever since that Kuro/Kag/Youko fic 'Dreams of You' (I think it's called; I have such a horrid memory...it's not even funny!) I feel bad for not reviewing or responding to your stories, but...*sighs* I'm never good at these things...haha~! Well, I can't say that this fic disappoints me, because, simply, it doesn't!! Two Swords, One Heart is a...a...gosh, I can't explain it or give it a good adjective! It's marvelous, superb, all that and a bag of Cooler Ranch Doritos!! I love Kagome (she's my all-time favorite character...Honestly, the show should be renamed 'Kagome' instead...but maybe I'm too radical! Lol.) I love Kenshin. I love Hiei. So, all in all, your story is the perfect thing for me. Seriously, I'm such a fanatic of this story. I wake up each morning, go see your story, squeal over the three new chapters you spew out, read them, and then fall back asleep because everything else is so boring at my house. I know, I'm tre obsessed! Oh, I hope you aren't freaking out because I centered my whole existance on your fictions....Aiyah, I'm so not good at writing reviews; I tend to gush out my feelings (as you and all the other people probably can tell)! You do have an odd way of joining sentences together. Just a comma, no conjuction words. That's something that could be fixed just by replacing the ',' with a ';'! I also have a question. Where is Kenshin's polite speech? In the English dub, he always goes 'that we should/shouldn't', 'that I do/don't', 'that she/he should/shouldn't' and in the Japanese version, he does basically the same thing...only in Japanese, obvious! Haha~! Even though Kagome is a litte OOC, I really don't mind because you make Kagome stronger and tougher. I thank you for that! Chapter 19 blew my mind!! Poor Kagome...seeing Kenshin naked...She must be mortified! Oooh, I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! I never want this fiction to end! But, alas, all good things must end! So I'll be waiting for your next great fiction! Maybe a fan fiction with a Yuusuke and Kagome pairing? Please?

=^~^= Insanely Obsessive, Sei-san=^~^=

Oy! Awesome couple of chaps! I'm loving this story so much! Baka men! Why oh why do they so misunderstand?! *shakes me head* Well, update soon, kks? :)

Sayuri-chan

*SNickers* Bet she wasn't expecting that at all. Naked kenshin... *drools* Wonder what she's going to do now? Please update soon, can't wait to find out.