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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I can't wait to see how Hiei reacts to his daughter. I'm sure it will be a shock to him. Good chapter, please update soon!
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im kinda sad that kenshin got married and he can't be with kagome... so atleast kagome mite be able to see hiei again rite? plz update soon i wanna find out wut happens next!!
person kiara703
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey can't wait till Kagome and Hiei finally get back together. So when do they realize that they are from the same time? And will Kagome finally live in her time for good or stay in the past. Can't wait to find out. please update. your story is really good.
person DarkMystic
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just spent...half of the day reading this story. Cause of course I loved it that much. Its not all sex, but the tension between the three was funny. ^_^ Strange pairing, but when i saw that kenshin was in this one I was eager to read it. Think it was well written, and very well planned. Could you send me an email when the next chapter is updated, I really am looking foreward to reading more. ^_^
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL I still see trouble brewing between Inu and Hiei. Somehow I don't think Hiei's going to give on this one though I could smack him silly for his assumptions. Good chapter, please update soon!
person muffins and cheese
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kenshin Died... i am so sad.....but, life goes on....great story!
person sendosha
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boy, it´s time for Hiei to act like a man. Looking forward to the lemon
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person cjy
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow lol kinky at least the guys are relitivly happy to share her atho i rekon i prefered the hiei scene most.this is a really great story and nicely done lemons lol hmm did hiei mark her or did he just bite her great job update wheneva possible ja
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn I think I need a bath now... or a shower. *Wipes brow* Hiei certainly knows how to get her screaming doesn't he? Awesome lemon, I love it! And he marked her too! That should prove to Kagome just how much she is wanted. Wonderful chapter, please update soon!