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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, can't blame her for her reaction to kurama. He's too damn handsome for his own good *snickers* Figures Inu would want to go, I can't imagine he's pleased knowing that Hiei and Kenshin are both there. I'm off to read the next chapter!
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo yay kenshin is back alive!!! yay im happy lol and u just had to stop when hiei was gunna meet his daughter!!!
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like everyone's damned confused lol Still, Hiei should know better than thinking she had replaced them. After all, Kikyo was mentioned several times as having some osrt of hold over Inu so it should damn well make sense to them. But being possessive males, they're going to think what they want lol Good chapter, please update soon.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh thats so sweet! I'm sure Hiei will make a great father once he gets used to the idea. Inu's being just as protective as I expected. I don't forsee him and Hiei ever deciding to like each other. Good chapter, please update soon
person sendosha
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, he marked her. Interesting turning.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, Hiei was just as I had expected, acting as if nothing had happened. Back to the normal routine of things. Though, he hides alot of his emotions so I have to wonder what he was thinking as he watched her lay there. How are the two men feeling about her, knowing their time is almost up. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that's got to hurt. Finding out she's pregnant, not knowing who the father is but loving both men. And both of them pushing her away when she needs them the most. I can understand why she wouldn't tell them about the child but still What a rough position to be in. Great chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Rose got to go with her, if nothing else Rose will be able to comfort her where it's not likely anything else will. Excellent chapter, so very sad. I'm off to read the next one.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I can't wait to see what part Koenma is going to play in this. I wonder if Hiei will sense her through the mark when she returns to her own time. Love this story, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
part 1 yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy theres more im sooo happy i want hiei n kags a chance to be together with their baby but am soo sad kenshin wont be with themthis time but imhappy it all worked out in the end please update soon i cant wait to see wat happens next