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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man things just keep getting worse and worse for her. I'm sure Hiei's goingto yell at her now for getting injured, especially while she had the baby. Damn, I hope she catches a break soon. Good chapter I look forward to the next one. Please update soon.
person mhall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why does kagome always in pain come on she nrrd good things to happen
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, it's so good to see that Hiei has accepted his family and still wants Kagome. I don't believe he sees either of them as a burden thankfully. Glad that Kenshin has a place in the family as well. I'm sure Mukuro is not going to be happy in the least but it can't be helped. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whos mukuro??? i hope u update soon
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad they managed to work things out, perhaps now he'll give her the affection that they both need. Very good chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. Update soon please.
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* About time someone didn't fall into a puddle of goo at Kurama's feet. She's got the perfect family as it is, I see no need for the Kitsune to be joining in lol Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.
person vavri
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe i love this story its great and im so glad kenshin is back maybe kagome can one of his kids he seems to really want one and hes good with them, hm hiei is gettin really protective of her and alil jealous but then he shudnt glare at her and show more affection yay the gang just meet her its great, i think i know wot kurama was gunna ask hiei lol hes very cheeky well update when ya can plz great job ja
person mhall
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kept it up. great story write more.
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ox King
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers! I am very much loving this story. Hiei/Kagome fics rule. Not to mention that this story is very well writen. Mooore Please soon.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that Kenshin is back and willing to help. I wonder how the two of them will react when they find out that Kagome is indeed from this time period. Very good chapter, I'm off to read the rest.