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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

person Mysterylady_Tx
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man Poor GUYS!! Hehehe!!!
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait so did kagome give the demon the jewel?
person Mysterylady_Tx
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH no Poor Kagome, Man oh man, are misunderstandings running Rampant...YIKES!!! GREAT GREAT chapter 14
person Neo-Crystal
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think the next child should be kenshin's. Are you doing this to build Hiei and Kagome' s relationship then work on Kenshin and Kagome??
person Mysterylady_Tx
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naked KENSHIN!! YAY!!! LOL...oh man, hehehe...GREAT chapter:D
person bluemoon_175
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is one of the best i have read. please keep the chapters comming.
person Mysterylady_Tx
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man so are you saying that he just STEALS people from everywhere??? GREAT beginning:D
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.... I never.. damn I never expected her to say something like that or him to hit her for it. Damn, that.. oh hell.. Somehow I don't see either of them apologizing any time soon. Damn, thats going to remain between them for a long time I think. Good chapter, update soon please.
person cho
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story altho the chapter was kinda sad poor kagome is always gettin shit from hiei he needs to let go and just admit that he likes her and be more affection with her but at least kenshin is there to help her great job plz update wen ya can ja
person doodler5000
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really have to commend you for how you handled Kenshin's return to his own time and life, and then reincarnating him in Kagome's time. As a fan of Ruroni Kenshin, I had reservations at the beginning of your story on how you would reconcile the actual story with your own story. I know I have never cried harder than watching the aged and ill Kenshin struggling to get home to die in the arms of Miss Kaoru. Had you tried to change that story, your own story would have suffered. The way you treated the situation was masterful and showed you really have an understanding of the anime's you are writing about. Keep up the good work.