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@ 13

Tee-hee, I love this so far. Ugh, I sound like Eri or Yuka... Oh, well. Anyway, this is cute so far. I love Kenshin (haven't seent he series in quite a while, just like YYH) and Hiei, too, so I like the idea so far. But poor Kagome. No other women to be with, alone with two sexy guys that "don't want to be near her". *sigh* It gets better, I hope. ^_^

@ 40

*Sigh* It seems I'm not signed in more often, nowadays... Oh, well.

Geezus, me likey. See, I'm one of those people that like the rough stuff. Adjectives like "mercilessly" and verbs like "slammed" or "plunged", and WHOO BOY I'm a happy camper! XD

I understand Kagome's confusion with Hiei. It DOES seem like he only wants to rutt and got carried away. But we all know better, ne? Of course, Kenshin hasn't shared his thoughts about loving her, either... Eh, I dunno. I'll just wait and see how this goes.

Oh, one helpful hint. Please be careful with your punctuation and sentence fragments. They make the story less smooth and hard to follow. Thanks bunches!

i really like this story i cudn't help but be drawn to it, i cudn't stop until the last chapter please update soon!

Great story! Not sure why I never read it earlier but it is really really good. It's very original and holds it's entertainment throughout all the chapters. I love Kagome and Hiei pairings and adding Kenshin into the mix just made it that much hotter. Please continue on and update soon! >^..^<

This is a really good fic. I don't think I've ever read even a descent triple cross, but this one so far combines the three without being unnecessary. Looking forward to the updates

Of course I forgot about this triple cross which is good too but I like the other better.

I think Yukina might end up having to put her foot down at some point. Hiei may have good intentions but eventually Yukina is going to have to be the one to make the ultimate decision on who it is she mates. I'm surprised the argument between him and Kagome didn't escalate with her last comment, I can only imagine how it must have hurt him (even if he didn't show it) to hear her pretty much say she wasn't happy being with him. Then again, he has to know that he's been an insufferable jerk lately. Maybe more alone time with Kenshin is what Kagome needs. She'll get the reassurance and affection she needs from him and just maybe Hiei will realize he can't keep treating her so badly. Awesome lemon between Kenshin and Kag's by the way. I'm certain that her little performance blew his mind (among other things). Can't wait to see what is going on through Hiei's mind now that he knows what the two of them were up to and the way she snuggled up against Kenshin ignoring him in the process. I anxiously await the next chapter. Update soon please.

Hiei you BAKA! Just because you're pissy does not mean you take it out on her. Now you have her doubting how much you care for her again and undid all the work you kjust accomplished.... UGH MEN!

Love the new love interest that's sparking between Yukina and Kurama. Kuwabara will have to be taken out of the picture somehow, though with what he just did it's doubtful Hiei will let him anywhere near his sister. Can't say as I blame him either, even though Kuwabara wasn't in his right mind. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.

Yeah you updated.... I am so glad.. update soon please

Love this new chappter so is someone like Kanna out there holding Kuwabara's soul so that they can control his body? Plz update soon.