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LOL Sounds like Hiei's having a bit of a problem now isn't he? *Snickers* Yes, I hope he gets to carry her often, eventually he's going to lose control and make an advance on her mwahaha Good chapter update soon please.

hey wot a cool chapter,tho there was no hiei its still cool that there was lots of kenshin hes lovely seems kags is more happier around him than hiei,lol i can just imagine the moments between the 2,kenshin seems to be strainin being with her alone i hope he doesnt do anything he will regret as he doesnt seem the type to forgive himself for anything and hes to cute to be depressed or summit we need sum nice fluff plz update soon ja

hah i think its a great pairing damn no hiei oh wel update plz

ohayo now this is a rad story i like kaggy hmm she seems to like wearin his clothes hehehe

*chuckles* Is it just me or does it seem Hiei is getting a bit jealous there. Wonder what he is going to go off and do tomorrow... Perhaps take care of a problem while he's out? *snickers* Very good chapter, please update soon

He just loves to piss her off doesn't he. That's a great way to make her feel like shit thats for sure. That was nice of Kenshin to offer his shirt, atleast it gives her some amount of clothing to keep her warm. Good chapter please update soon.

fanFREAKINtastic story,i luv the typical man idiocy(when hiei said he has seen better)they all do that when someone says "like what u see" its a wonder guys are still alive when they something like that girls we all are afraid of our appearance if we werent make-up wud not exist.
I hope there is gunna be more,kagome makin the guys feel uncomfatable with her womanly charms and body lol nothing betta than a couple of awkward moments, it also sounded like hiei was tryin to match kenshin by comin closer to pear at her legs because he was and when he got alil annoyed how she was starin and kenshin chest if only he took his shirt of to *drools* update quickly ja ne

Well, this is unfolding rather nicely. I must say, I haven't read this pairing before and I am just itching to see how it plays out. Please, please, please update soon.

hey ive just recently found aaf but ive red most of ur stories and im writin to show my apprieciation(forgive my bad spellin)athou this story is very interstin and defo the first ive seen so plzzzz continue this one its cool its a great start ja

Please more, this one is better than "Returning to you", not that it´s bad. It´s just Kagome is my favourite character and the pairings are great