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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

person missy wild
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very creative Kagome is not happyThey both abandoned her,HOW STUPID Can you write some more chapters?
person hana
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going update soon
person cho
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome crossover.
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is heartbreaking, it's a good thing she has rose there or she would be dead by now. I cant imagine how esteem shattering this is to her. Being left for dead by two people she thought she could depend on. Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon
person CM
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OKay you updated...alot! WOOH! GO YOU! But those asses! Grrr, if I got my hadns on them..oooh but I can;t wait for the guilt trip! Heee. Write some more! ne?
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, glad Kenshin arrived when he did poor Kagome didn't stand a chance it seemed and the dragon probably would have destroyed her along with the bad guy. Keep up the good work and update soon please
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And they manage to hurt her feelings yet again unintentionally. Poor Kagome, I can't imagine how she's feeling right now. Probably thinks he kissed her to torment her somehow. Very good chapter, Please update soon!
person chanda
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope she kicks both there ass!

I sure would'nt be to thrilled too see them.
person kohana
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey wow i loved that chapter lol it was great poor hiei but at least he didnt rat on kagome but hten again that ent sumthing he wud do i bet kagome isnt feeling so bad now knowin that shes the only free woman about,kenshin sure kicked arse and with out killin he greats yay the gang is back together now sum fun can begin plz update soon
person chica
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huuuray they saved hiei kenshin seemed relived he didnt have to kill even if he was the golden eyed battousai plz update quickly