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for Two Swords, One Heart

by kimisan

schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, I want to smack Hiei for not noticing how exhausted she was. Oh that youkai! Glad Rose went and got help, dammit they better come back or Im kicking them both! Update soon please
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...now that was just evil! I think Kagome needs to just pounce on Kenshin. It would help them both out considerably. Besides...how could she not want to?

Excellent chapters. I really hope to see another update soon :)
person Vanessa
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey love what's happening so far. Kagome surviveing that long without Hiei & Kenshin has got to have them feeling guilty especially after the way she acts. can't wait for the update. and to findout what happens Does Kagome get to keep Rose when she leaves. will they mate and if so what happens when they have to go home.
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really can't believe they both just left her like that. And then came back only to do it again! *sigh* men...

I am truly enjoying this story, even though it has a few sad areas. It amazes me that everyone is so clueless to everything and that their situation has ended up so screwy. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay they came back!!! and then left again... well plz update soon
person miaka star
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its gettin really hot now ohhh please say kags gonna have her way wit one of them soon i really cant wait for some lemon i really enjoy this fic but r u still gonna be working on the kur/kag/korunue one??? ne way please update this fic ^^
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not surprised she doesn't believe them, not with how they treated her before. I'm curious on how the guys are going to get around this one now, she's not going to trust them again very easily. Good chapter, please update soon
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I like the little talk the guys had. Hiei was certainly blunt and to the point, just the way I like him. At least we know what is on Hiei's mind now, perhaps they will see about getting her back into good health. Very good chapter, can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.
person Sayuri-chan
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Surprise is right! *lol* Wonder what's gonna happen next...;) Update soon...this is a terrific story. ::heart ::

Sayuri-chan