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I think this story is forgotten. Four/Five greatest female writers forgot about their stories ....

Is this story forgotten? I remember the other great chapters (Yay!Hiei, Yay! Kenshin, Super YAY! Kagome) and was wondering if you were set on editing and posting or if life had taken you hostage?
I also noticed your other stories were pretty much abandoned, please tell me you'll update! *puppy eyes*

Hii.. I would just like to say this story is absolutely terrific. I started reading it awhile back but i didnt get all the way to the end of the chapter list. Just recently i came upon it again and low n behold its gone T-T. Any idea when the revision/rewriting is gonna be done? Could u post maybe the chapters that r done? o.o; Love ur work i cant get enough.. seriously ><;.

Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read how they meet and what happens with each one.

OMG!! I am so excited that you are working on this again!!! You have no idea how often I re-read all you posted. Love, love, love this story! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Me again! I am interested in what kinds of changes you think you will make while revising this. Are you just looking at writing style/grammatical crap? Or are you thinking of actually changing some events? Or people? Because I've got to tell you, I think you hit all the right notes the first time. The absolute ONLY thing that ever struck me as even a tiny bit off was Kagome's language. I did have to laugh a few times at her swearing. I think you wrote her with enough backbone that she didn't have to be quite so abrasive. I know you were playing her off against THE MAN: HIEI HIMSELF, but I did think a little more softness might have broke him down faster. But when it comes to style and little writing errors, that stuff never detracts from a good story for me. And I cannot wait to finally see what you have planned for the ending. Obviously the bad guy will need to be recaptured/killed. Yukina's "problem" resolved. (Though that's just a side story for me.) Hiei needs to fess up to Kagome like a real man, er demon. Kagome will have to bear poor Kenshin a child he can really bond with. And there needs to more hot Hiei/Kag, Kenshin/Kag, and Hiei/Kag/Kenshin scenes!! YEEHA! Any timeline in mind for this story? And, which one will you tackle next? Inquiring fans want to know!! Again: thanks for coming back to this!!

This sparks my interest *nods* so I'll be back ^__^

Glad to see you are working on this one again. It's always interesting to see how a persons writing style grows from when you first begin. I loved this story before and I'm sure that I will enjoy even more so with the added detail and scene changes you have planned. Can't wait to read more, update soon please.

WOW
sound real good cant wait to see the first chap

Alright, apology accepted ... now ... are you planning to update Two Swords, One Heart?