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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

awsome story pretty lady

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hello there. Just dropping by with a frendly review. I love IY/YYH crossovers. More importantly I love the the Hiei/Kagome love stories. Love triangles are a little tricky. I'm looking forward to seeing how strong your plot idea is. So far I like it.

This fic is good,and well written.In saying that I think this should be a Hiei/Kag/karuma-Youko fic.Because you don't see alot of them on here any way,I think.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

i love this chapt as much as the first i llike how ur developing hieis n kagomes relationship keep up the awsome work!!! i love kag/kur(youko)/hiei pairings but i would sooo love to see a simple pairing of hiei n kags after akk that shes been through she needs a simple love that u and all the readers injoy please update soon^^thx

Very nice Hiei/Kag fluff. I wonder what her mother is going to say when Hiei ends up taking her inside with her injured. Introductions will be forethcoming I am certain, unless he takes her to Kurama though I'm unsure if she would be ready for that. Excellent chapter, you may want to go over the formatting though, AFF has decided to throw in symbols and odd letters throughout the chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm off to read the other stories update now. Keep up the good work!

Awesome start to another crossover. I could kiss you for making this a Hiei/Kag *Dances around for joy* Ahem yes, very unique start to the story. I have NEVER seen anything like the way that they meet this time and I must commend you on your originality. It's quite refreshing to see new ideas pop up instead of the same things over and over again. I also like how you didn't immediately jump into what happened with the final battle. I am not sure if you plan to put it in another chapter or not but I'm quickly learning there are only so many ways that someone can kill Naraku off lol I wonder what Hiei will think of Kagome's story when she tells it to him?, It's enough to make most beings demon or not laugh in disbelief but Hiei's seen alot. He is perhaps the one person I could see listening to her without condemning her and calling her a liar about it. The fact that he could tell she had the Shikon certainly helps as well. Excellent chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Please update soon!

hurry up and update person i want to what he says to her story