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for The Pure Heart of A Child

by SayuriNakamura

person Ryukotsusei
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I'd say the guys just screwed up badly. It would have been far better for them to just tell her what was going on. I'm positive that she would have understood. And now with Inuyasha making an appearance. I don't know how much she's going to be able to take. Writers block is definitely a bitch, hopefully it clears for you soon. Can't wait to read more.
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update asp

THANKS
person HJ11
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nah man Nah...how could u?....u...u...left me with such a cliffhanger it ain't even funny!!! I am gonna.....I'll let ur imagination think about wat i'll do to you if u dont upd8 soon and when u do send me an e-mail or i'll......................
person kougalover123
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW......the emotions being shown by both hiei and kurama are intense. please i am hooked please update soon i can't wait to see what naraku is going to do with the rest of the Kag's old demon friends to get to her. please update quickly.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*screams head off* I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, so intense you had me on the edge of my seat! Keep up the wonderful work, I absolutely adore this story. Update soon please.
person Kage Otome
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is such a monkey butt, it's so good Hiei and Kurama were able to help her. I wonder what's going through Naraku's morbid, twisted little mind...Keep up the good work! ^_^
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?