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for The Pure Heart of A Child

by SayuriNakamura

person mangamaniac
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Being a fairly strict fan of Hiei/Kagome or Sesshoumaru/Kagome, I really like the way you have drawn out their relationships. The only thing that I would even dare suggest needed more was her affinity for Kurama. Just a little too quick, a little too shallow -- especially for a double-marking. But, I am hooked! Can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru meddles! Throwing Inu back into the mix should be fun, too! Another interesting tale -- I applaud your talent even as I humbly beg for more.
person Sapphire
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I love it! Can you please update? I wonder what will Kouga and Inu-Yasha reacts when they found out Kagome's mated ... with two demons. Lolz. This is going to be fun. Please update! Please!!!!!
person Tushuri
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! I love it!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Tushuri
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens between the guys. I pray that you update again soon. Can't wait!
person Ryukotsusei
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, it looks like things are going to heat up rather quickly. With both Inuyasha and Kouga there and Hiei gone into heat, I'm afraid the first move made towards her and the apparition's going to go ballistic on someone lol can't wait to read more, update soon please.
person BrokenSouledPoetess (NSI)
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any idea how happy I am to see you back and updating?! Damn woman! Make me think you'd fallen of the face of the Earth or something. Hmph.

I can't wait to see what happens when Inu-puppy tries to force his will on Kagome...I am sure he'll have a swarm of irate demons on his ass before he can blink. I have the feeling Sesshoumaru would be at the forefront of the barrage.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see inu reaction when he finds out kags mated lol please updat soon i so enjoy readin ur stories
person polyotaku
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story? its so grand! and it's the only story with my favorite pairing in it =D
person Angelwings
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Oo I LOve this Story^^ I read all your Storys and find them awesome ^^ Please please opdate yor Storys soon ^^