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for Twisted Deception

by HypnoticUchiha

person Peacemaker
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2 was a very good chapter but I was slightly confused about the pairings. Was sesshomarou with keada or kagome? Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Backlash Wave
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please.
person Knight2
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Story looks very intresting. I hope you update soon.
person Bookreader9999
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is off to a good start. Nice suspense if Sakura is already a character we are familiar with (i.e. Kagome or Sango) or someone new.

But, you might want to double check the spelling on some of the words your using. For example, morning should actually be spelled mourning in this case.

Overall, good effort.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Peacemaker
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story looks really good so far and I was wondering how was with Inuyasha in the begining of the story? Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.