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by Hrtofdrkns

person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a sick, twisted, evil little fic. Believe it or not, I couldn't stop reading until I was finished. Not for the happiness, but for just to see what would happen next. But I wonder what happened to Sesshie? Did he just ran away, scared knowing that he had no chance to defeat him? But either way, this was pretty good. EM
person Youkainu obsessed
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was the best story ever!!! I love it!! I don't care what anybody said, this story was well written and thought out. Good job!! Can't wait till you come back to writing!!!
person Em
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa... weird ending but w/e.
person Kaeye
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to those who say that what you wrote is garbage because its not true

Sure to some it may not seem like something good but that doesn't mean its garbage. Some will hate it and some will love it and some will just be confused but its the same way for every
piece of literature. If someone complains that your story is a broken up mess well than look at poetry.. which in most cases is just confusing

Sure your story may not fit the very definition of a story but despite what anyone else says it is a work of art just like any other so cheers to you buddy.
person penpaninu
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you were going for a shock value, I think you got it ^_^ Very uhm...different? And gory. I confess I only skimmed your work as it was too flashy for my virgin eyes (laugh) I really don't know what else to say.... Shocking.
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you forgot a line...

And we shall rule the galaxy as rapist and son.
person lithium88
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh crap. hah, wow wat an ending. not bad! not exactly wat i was expecting, but good nonetheless. ^_^ sad it's over thou, not that i'm a sadistic creep or nothing... i just liked the story. well, once again... job well done. kuddos. later. t.c
lithium*
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...i liked the ending. I liked the entire fic.
It was very original, and eye-popping. I truly
admire your courage for continuing despite
people trying to constantly bring you down.
Well done.
person chanda
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great ending to well plotted out fic. I do hope you will write again.
person sirhcnotlih
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wha? You mean Inuyasha lost? Can you E-mail me and explain it?