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mwahaha he seems to be kinda starting his own harem^^

I opened this story up, curious as to what the contents were going to be. It's like a train wreck, in that I can't tear my eyes away from it. Sometimes I curse the fact that I've inherited my mum's inability to put down something she starts reading. Bleh. I didn't give the first chapter that much thought, but that second one... gah.

Suppose I should have checked your existing works and favourite stories first, to get an idea of precisely what this little bugger would include. It's written well, at least. If I wasn't already virtually immune to most things I've encountered (Either accidentally or on purpose) on the net, I might just be disgusted more than I already am.

Looks like you'll end up with a few less readers after this second chapter. Ah well. I hope Inuyasha ends up 'advancing' up the chain of people to abuse, so to speak. Well, that's almost a given on some counts, isn't it? After all, he's got to go against the others at some point... the only question is 'How?'

Sexual abusing children would only get him so far. I guess I'll be following this and skipping over the yaoi sections with more care from now on... :P

cooooooooool

They do need to pay for what they did to Inuyasha, BUT NOT RIN SHE SHOULD GROW UP AND GET SOME INUYASHA DICK.

i sense much anger in you... go to the dark side you must NOT... mistaking fic a hatred dump you musn't... else short-violent-fic you'll get... ^_^.