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Wah shippo got eaten I like him...but this is otherwise pretty good.

And I, sir, have a quote for you: "The day I become the richest man in the world is the day I invent a way to stab people in the face over the internet."

Glorifying rape and brutalization against women like that it's a fucking masculine rite of passage...I haven't experienced such horrified disgust since Nixon's former press secretary announced the best way to reduce crime in the nation was to abort all Black babies. The original story was misogynistic enough, but that's blatant male chauvinist hate-speech. Inuyasha butchers his best friends over some trivial slapstick and he's "standing up for himself?" This story's demented fanfollowing have gone from a ludicrous farce to downright sad.

Terse, but that kinda fits. I liked it.

Truly amazing. I don't read dark fics often but this one was definately at the top. As for you being make and 21 I have no reason to doubt it. Second 21 not old. not old at all. You definately made this a very dark twisted and brutal fic. It was as enjoyable as a dark fic can be.

What I liked about this fic is that Inuyasha finally stands up for himself, gets those damn beads off of his neck, and gets his revenge on Kag's. I can't believe that I actually liked the fic because I'm not into humiliation or sex with children.

It is very dark and we all have our dark side whether we admit it or not. It took guts to put it out front like that. I wish I had that kind of courage. I also liked your take on trust since I believe that it is a selfish emotion that holds humans to a standard that they can never meet. Through all the ugliness, you reveal some truths, even if you do might believe them yourself. I wonder if you have trusted and found it a fraud.

It was awesome that you had Inuyasha take over Naraku. Great idea. Your writing flows quite well. I don't have a problem with it and it is nice to see a male author. There are so few.

Welcome to AFF and keep writing!

I think you got a very dark aura in your life itself. That's why I see all your fictions are all about gory, raping fucking business. Despite whatever your supporters defended about you. I think because most of them also like to be evil in their mind. Too bad really! Woa..I think I talk too much....Adios!

That ending.. T__T Was horrible..

I don't know who's worse, you for writing this, or me for reading it. It was strangely...satisfying. I think because there are so many freaking shards, you just know that anime will never end. I am so glad that SOMEONE finally got them, and the fact that inuyasha got them, makes the entire series redundant. you are pure evil. hahahahahaha! except for the raping and pillaging and murder and mayhem, this was pretty good

I LOVED that ending! Go inuyasha go inuyasha your bad your bad! XD It was unexpected and pretty original. I definatly loved the ending.

cruel, gory, and hateful, but it's okay......