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i didn't give u a bad review! i like it! plz update! and 4 all the ppl that don't like it, well they can kiss my ass and not read it damnit! just update k'? and i'll b happy! ^_^

I completely respect you, dear.
You have the courage to put what you write on here, knowing, hopefully.. that you were going to meet some resistance.
I love the way you're telling this story. It puts so much more character into it when done like this.
Content wise. So what if people are offended? This is an adult site for ADULTS. There're warnings all over the place in this story and if someone is not intelligent enough to see them, then.. they really shouldn't be reading it in the first place.

Congrats.

just read chapter 11. awesome job so far! can't wait to see where all this terrorizing goes! ^_^ update soon!! t.c. bye
lith*

While this story is very, very dark, I think it is a wonderful story.
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OK, I wasn't going to review this until I saw the reponse to Bill the Surly. I've been reading since the beginning, trying to keep an eye out for developments. I am saddened to report there are none.

To illustrate, here is my summary of the story.

Inuyasha goes ape shit and starts killing/raping/pillaging. No particularly deep reason, just an adolescent mood swing because he doesn't like how tooth-rotteningly-sweet little Kagome is treating him.

Now, Inuyasha is stuck in a stasis of being really nasty and butt raping people. Somehow, he manages to make Kohaku, who, by all other accounts, is actually good at heart, enjoy being ass packed, doing the same to Shippou and killing random, innocent humans. Kagura suddenly develops a small girl fetish.

Sesshomaru is reduced to a begging, groveling minion who will do anything to save Rin. Kouga is killed, then brought back to life, and suddenly capitulates to whatever is going on.

The only character with any kind of backbone is Inuyasha, and he is about as deep as a puddle. Character development has become non-existent and is replaced by the author demeening characters who come already well-constructed.

It's amusing, it's entertaining, but it is not well written or a very good story. Not to say that you are a 'bad writer' just that some stories don't lend themselves to actually being created. I think a big ole OOC warning is in order. That would make it easier to swallow.

Hah! Take that Sesshy! Way to go! So, who's next?

Although it's a twisted story I personally think you are a very, very talented writer. To put your mind out there so far and create something is hard enough, but to do so like you have done means that you are a very talented writer and have a good imagination. Like I said this story is twisted, and whoever doesn't like it, DON"T READ IT! However, I think it is good, and I agree with you that rapists are scumbags. I enjoy your story though because you have so much creativity. Keep your good work up!

Ah, lovely. Only on AFF.N can someone crap on paper and get praised for it.

I can forsee quite a few extremely violent Inuyasha/Kouga rape scenes in the near future. Interesting, though. Wonder if/when Sesshoumaru and Rin re-enter the picture...

God...the bile is just sitting in my throat. It's pure madness...beautiful madness.
No fic has ever made me feel so defiled! Yet this one...Kami-sama.