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for Disturbed Endearment

by Nicolas

person Bianca
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! This story is funny!! I can't wait until you update.. but I'm a lttle confused --_-- so can you explain the story for me a bit please? I would appreciate it a lot. Thanx a bunches and hope to hear from you soon!!!^_^
person drake220
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that last sentance was a very inu like statement. i don't care how trite a phrase it is, for inuyasha it fits!! the story was a but confusing as its a little unclear whether its an AU or one of those 'iun-joins-the-future' fics. either way, its entertaining and interesting. nice job.
person Dia
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, so far so good... i'm typically not a fan of good-girl-kag-meets-bad-boy-inu stories but this one seems to have potential. for one thing, kagome and inuyasha seem to actually be in character, which is rare but definitely refreshing. though i'm confused as to why the 'sit' command worked, i'm sure you'll explain in due time. i hope to read more soon.
person mel
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is gonna be awsome!!!! i love it so far. i really cant wait for the next chapter. so please update again soon. i gotta say it's just awsome!!! :-)
person karli
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story has a good start..please continue...good luck