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for Disturbed Endearment

by Nicolas

person ReRe
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE !!!!!!!

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person Bianca
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! That was a funny yet sexy chapter. I liked hoe he surprised her. Well I hope that Inuyasha gets his turn too. Well update soon!!
person lovingit
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouu. sexxyyy. please write more
person mel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was awsome!!!! please update again soon.
person Rei
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow cool chapter can you email me when you update?
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, keep it up. This is some good stuff!
person fallenangel7583
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done. must say, i was a bit thrown by the opening wiht her ability to sit him. thought for a moment you were tapping into a more canon based idea but stuck inu in the future. no worries, its good. i love the cocky attitude. just can't get enough of it! very well done!!!
person drake220
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
these ending lines are hysterical! i love them. the chapters are short, sweet and sexy! good job adn keep updating!!
person Bianca
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thosechapters were funny. Now I get it!! YAY!!!! Well I hope you update soon but...can i ask you a favor? Can u sort of make the chapters longer? Please? I would appreciate it....if its not to much of a bother that is. Well thats all from me. Bye bye!! ^_^
person MidNight
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love ur story! it's great so far! i hope u continue with it! soo... our hanyou is a badboy type eh? haha fits inuyasha very well! love it! ^_^ update soon! great job!
*night*