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for Pleasure and Pain

by AshtonRose

person FireKitty
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Scary. What' gonna happen to fluffy?!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!! >______O!!
person TearsofTwilight
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Twitch Twitch* Wow. I'm so excited. Great job so far. I can't wait to see what Naraku
does to Sesshi (I know, I'm sick). Anyway good job. Looking forward to the really kinky
stuff. Great now I sound really perverted. Well, who's to deny their own nature, right?

-TOT
person WOW
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me think that Naraku should make wild animel sex with sesshoumaru!!

Poor inu was crying... But hey he had a hard-on.
person Dante
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not very good at writing sex scenes? You seem to be doing a pretty good job to me.

D_
person yamisugar
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tilts head* sounds like a very interesting plot set up ^^ Cant wait to see where you take the story!
person Cloud_Haven
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh more! hehe with Narakus mind i wouldnt be surprized if he made them pets and for his amuse ment make the brothers do eachother (hint hint)*gets smacked by the inu bothers* ouch! X.X*plop*
person Dante
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I can tell already that this is going to be a facinating read. I can't wait to see what your mind (and the mind of your readers come up with).

D_
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! I like the direction this is heading for. Looks really good and promising. I hope to see more of this soon!! Naraku and 2 toys.
*walks off mumbling, that’s going to be so hot*
person TearsofTwilight
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEH(grins evilly^.^). GO YOU! Evil torture stories are always the best (as long as they have some sort of plot).
I wonder how Naraku will torment Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Will the brothers fall in love? NO! DON'T ANSWER
THAT! I want to wait and see. Anyway good begining. I'm sure many people are hooked. As for ideas, I can't
think of any good ones at the moment, but if a particularly nasty one comes to mind I'll be sure and drop
you a note. Once again great job, and please, PLEASE keep writing. Don't let this fic die because if I don't
find out what happens I might die.

Arigato,

-TOT
person Me
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!
Especially when it's Naraku and Sess!! InuYasha can come to.