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for Pleasure and Pain

by AshtonRose

person Tachi
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more! Whats with the delay here!
person gun
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bitch bitch update
person Atocha
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ogwd!!! I want to know what happens!!! You have to post more on this soon!!! Poor Inuyasha. And Sesshy... I want more!!! Good job though I like this story alot. Your a good writer!
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp and coos* What a darkly erotic chapter!!! Gawd that was dark!! *loved it* Loved how Inuyasha cleaned up Sesshoumaru. Then how Sesshoumaru explained about the pain that Inuyasha is fixing to feel, trying to make it better. Ohh then the dark hottie, well being the dark hottie that he is!! Very good intense reading!!
person yamisugar
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>___< grr cliffie!! Good chapter, though. Cant wait to read the next one!
person Rawben
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh... that was a cruel place to stop! lol, but it was good... update soon!
and if you're looking for more ideas: tenacles. naraku is known for them. they're a must. ;)
person TearsofTwilight
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH! That bit when Inu was 'cleaning' Sesshoumaru's wounds was gorgeously kinky! It's
so awesome when someone with as much writing talent as you will write a story so dark
and scary. Bondage, blood, and exsquisite description blend together seemlessly in this
fic. Arigato!!!

-TOT
person Dante
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are truly evil! Ending that chapter like that nearly made me fall out of my chair. Lol

D_
person Jade
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No Way! Worst cliffie ever! lol This is such a great story and I'm dying to know what happens! You must update! :P
person Lili
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF!! CONTINUE!!!! OMFG!!!! xD Too good, please continue!!!! VERY VERY QUICKLY!!!