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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch1. well so far i'm glad you've kept them in character. it's pretty good!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch2. i'm with sesshomaru! sick but quite a turn-on! you did well on the sick sex!lol
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch3. i wanted to say this last chapter; how is it that the thing in the forest that makes demons weak isn't effecting naraku?
anyway great chappie!
anyway great chappie!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaa poor inuyasha, i could cry......lol
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was nice that you had Inuyasha top Sesshoumaru and there be no qualms about it. Although this fic was mostly lemon, it had a plot. I loved everything in it. Sess promising to return if Inuyasha needed it and saying that he would know when he was needed was a sweet touch. You did a wonderful job.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I'd like to add that it was an excellent thought to have Sess feel guilt at taking Inu's innocence. I do believe he is an honorable youkai. Their revelation of having softer feelings for each other made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Great job. I look forward to another Inuyasha fic from you.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! they got out!! that was great! ;) when will inu call for sess?? ;)
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*slides off chair* Oh that was sooooooooo HOT!! *fans self* This was a great chapter!! I love the way you had Sesshoumaru taking Inuyasha. The way the dark hottie Naraku was watching, and having quite a good time by himself!! 0_0The ending was absolutely perfect!! I am so going to miss this story. You fed my need for the darkness, quite nicely!! Thankyou!!!! *coos* Sequel, sequel!!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ending! *hugs Yasha and Fluffy* You need to make the sequal!!O_O WHOOT!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're one sick puppy. And I love you. That was totally awesome. Geeze, this site is turning me into such a hentai. Well written, so hot. Ah, one suggestion. Try drawing out the moment of climax and receding pleasure...please. That was the only thing I would add to. Now I have to go take a shower. Hehehe.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave