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for In The End

by medli

person Anon
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was an awsome story, i hope that you write more like this.
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOWWW!
absolutely amazing.
^_^
person Kiddie Kida Kitsune
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW this story was so sad! Sorry but the end made me cry, Im stupid!, but N-E wayz I re3ally loved this story. Good luck on your future writings
person dog demon
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT'S SO SWEET. I RATE THIS STORY A 5 STAR. *****
person Niki
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Learn to spell and maybe more people will read your crap. How old are you? 13?

For example, your summary:

"How will she react when he does something making her think on how she fills?"

"Fills" what? Fills a bathtub full of water? Fills a cup with tea? Or did you mean "feels"?

Good grief, you're pathetic.
person Twilight
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was both the saddest ang romantic thing that I have ever read and if this story was a book I would read it every day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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