rate_review Reviews

this really didn't do anything for me. i don't know if it's finished or anything, but you definitely have room to improve. and where's miranda, my favourite character?

Oh, sorry for the delay in my review - but I was so glad to see you updated. My, you are putting a fun twist on the fun with Kouga. Ayame is running of her off, he. Who will she meet next? Or, will you pair up Charlotte or Miranda?

I just love your fic!

Hiya!
First of all, I want to say thanks to all you dirty little hentais for reading! ;-)
This is definitely the most bizarre thing I've ever written, but I guess that's why they call it a challenge.
Gyousei, I really like the ideas! Thanks! I was thinking of Char/Naraku (yes, I am evil) somehow, but I like the Inu/Char thing a lot...

I wasn't sure how people would respond to this story (I never claim to be a great writer in the first place), but if I can inspire the hatred of illiterate children, I figure I must be doing something right!

Anyway, thanks for reading!

IT SUKS........ I WOULD FEATURE THE WHOLE CAST....YOUR CHAPTERS ARE SHORT AND I HATE THE WHOLE THING.

Kouga and carrie, i like that lol, i think shy charolette would be good with inu since hes shy too, and miranda needs a kinky one from miro, but whatever you have planned i can't wait to read it!!!

(sorry for the delay in reviewing, but been dealing with some serious computer hogs!)

I finally had a chance to sit down and read and boy was I impressed. You have Samantha, espeically, down pat. How do you do it? *Wowsers*

I love how you set it all up, with Carrie and Hojo in the beginning. Was so funny. And I think Sam and Sess really fit--she's so bold and sassy and he's so aroogant and cold. Hot, hot, hot. Now how about poor Charlotte--I can't wait to see her shock at finding out Sam is exactly correct...well off to read the next chapter.

Oh, oh, now I see why that other reviewer was calling Sam twisted. She was coming on to Jaken--that naughty girl!

And it seems that Kouga has taken an interest in Carrie--hm, can't wait for more!

Hi! I haven't logged onto my account in so long I didn't realize you had posted a story in answer to my challenge! Yeaaah for you! Sorry it took me so long to notice. I'm so excited about the story.

Well, I'll sit down in a minute and read and review.

first of all that was great for the s&t city girls, you kept them expecially samantha in great character. nice thing with having the sexy- sex-fiend samantha have a go at sesshy-sama, this sounds like a great story in the making, just one thing.... where's miranda? she's indeed in need of a good sex life never the less anyone at all, besides she's got a kid it's be a funny turn out.

INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING... I THINK THIS STORY SHOWS A GOOD PROMIS OF BECOMING SOMETHING MORE....AND I'M DESPRETLY WAITING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, SO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEASE AD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC!!!!!!!!OHH AND I TOTALY LOVE YOUR WORK BY THE WAY, SO KEEP IT UP O.K.