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oooo0oooo i love it good job but can u do me one little bittie thing................lol KILL THAT DAMN CLAY POT SHE DOSN'T DESERVE TO LIVE EVEN IF INUYASHA CHOSE HER!!!!!....lol thank u,and keep up the fantastic job!!

Here is the thing, i think that you have a good plot and are telling it fine. But you could have a greate story if you only went back and added maybe 2 more chapters of material. The story progressed a little too fast when it came to sesshomaru and kagome. It made her seem like a dirty horor. but please dont take this review as me trying to be rude or anything i was just trying to perhaps give you some ensight as to why allot of people havent been reviewing. plus you had a few errors witht he wording. It appeared like you typed in the word you meant but then when you ran spell check you didnt really look at what word it was replacing the word it was corecting with. but all in all im assuming that perhaps your taking the view of alternate universe inuyasha and that that is why the characters are so ooc. So in that case i think the story is good So keep updating soon. Also one last tip, nothing is worse then an author that doesnt update more then twice a month. Then you have to keep going back and re reading the material to remember where you left off and in my case i just dont read it any more. So good luck writing.

hey write more this story is getting good i wanna know what happens next

LEMON LEMON LEMON KLEMON!!! OK THAT WAS A great NEW CHAPPIE! hello sex goddess *winka* thank u again for that site its wicked *thumbs up*
u just get better and better lol keep up the great work!!! and totally do a lemon and if u dnt u no ill be cumin after u!! *cracks knuckles* anyway speak to ya lata;D

by the way that review up there ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
is from me lol i got to excited and didnt remember to put ma name in hehe

very good but...maybe you should re-format the chapters for the spelling errors.

HI LOVE YOUR STORY!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! ^_^ U SHOULD KNOW WHO THIS IS `_`

Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't delete this it's adorable except the inuyasha part YIKES!!!. I personally like inuyasha and kagome as a couple but i do still love the cute coupling sesshomaru and kagome have goin on. really cute waiting on next chapter. email me when the chapter is done k?!!!! keep up the awsome fics!

hi friend! lol,
this was a wicked chappie 5! loving the lime but when u gonna do a proper lemon *pouts* lolanyways update soon!

really good
write more please
i have no life so this is what i do all day
please finish