rate_review Reviews

for When Parents Are Right

by Jennibaby

person Church

schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM

OOOOOOOO FUK YEAH DIS is good it go dumb man

person Yamima

schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Your doing ok, grammar is a bit off,

that's ok, I'm no better

person Rawben

schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM

i love the plot! your OC seems good, but you might want to work on your grammar... or something.. the writing is a bit off... i'm not sure what it is... maybe you could get someone to read over it for you! ...maybe it's the tenses... anyhow... my mind is gone... its finals week...and this review keeps getting crappier..and crappier... update soon

person Vitaminless

schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This seems predictable enough.// Remember: commas are your friends.

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