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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad someone finally kept Kouga in character in a story. I mean, he's usually portrayed as the knight in shining armor out to save Kagome from the evil hanyou. He's nothing like that. He had his wolves eat an entier village. He's also arrogant and weak, relying on the jewel shards. If you haven't figured it out yet, I hate Kouga.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good work I love this story. It’s really interesting you have definitely caught my attention….so if you can, update as soon as possible PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!! You are so cruel..lol. I really am enjoying this fic so keep up the good work. Just a word of advice, you can have a beta review your work before you upload it onto a site. They will check everything over and give you some pointers. Cant wait to see what happens.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweety do you need a beta reader...there are alot of gramatical errors and redundancies (i know i spelled that wrong) but i love the story....and when did Kouga become freddy kugar
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! i need more!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good please continue soon.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Terrific. I knew that Sess would have the answers and the cure to Kag's mating mark from Koga. Sess is so cool. Awe Kag and Inu finally mating. That's so sweet. I'm glad Kag isn't prego with Koga's pup. That would just suck. I would only make one suggestion. Please try to put spaces between paragraphs and/or dialogue. My eyes go squirrly trying keep my place on the text. ^_^
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the world of the english writer. Anyway. A little rushed, but I still like it.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon