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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... wow... habba-habba.... *blushes*... Now THAT was one KICK ASS lemon story, this was simply put.... a pure work of art, a masterpiece, Mona Lisa... whatever you want to call it, it was simply PERFECT. I just love Kagura, she is one of my favourite characters in Inuyasha, just like Ayame. Even though i am a pretty strict Inuyasha/Kagome fan, it is good to read something like this between Kagura and Sesshoumaru, you don't see these kinds of stories often which is a shame because those two are so made for each other if you ask me.
Anyway, i loved this fic, REALLY good lemon and coming from me that's a LOT since i've read so many different kinds of lemons and i've written a couple myself and not to mention i have the title "God of Lemons", so i can say with all honesty that this is something you should treasure, this level of talent in writing a lemon even made ME envious.... oh boy, i am also a boy like you so i don't know what a woman feels during sex but after reading this, oh boy, let's just say that my 'little brother' (LOL) is rather hard right now and i am actually sweating too...
I salute you and give my full respect to your Lemon skills, you're freaking awesome and i MEAN it, keep writing, you rock.
Oh yeah, if you're ever puzzled on why i hold the title "God of Lemons", feel free to check out my stories as well, i have three epic fics and i also have two fics which are composed of a series of One-shots, then there is my LONGEST one-shot "Loneliness of the Free Wind", it's my first completed fic and it's about Kagura as well, though she is paired with an OC of mine, i have received nothing but positive feedback about my OC... in fact, my OC could have been nominated to Inuyasha fanguild's "Best OC" section but because the story is old and was not published during the year 2005, it was rejected...
Anyway, if you're ever interested, feel free to stop by and read my fics, if you don't know how to use the search here on AFF.net, Email me and i'll send you the link since i'm also an author here.
Man, this is the longest review i've written in a while, hopefully you aren't offended by my little... 'advertisement' above but i really would like to hear your opinnion on my stories as well because you have such a high level of skill...
see ya!
Anyway, i loved this fic, REALLY good lemon and coming from me that's a LOT since i've read so many different kinds of lemons and i've written a couple myself and not to mention i have the title "God of Lemons", so i can say with all honesty that this is something you should treasure, this level of talent in writing a lemon even made ME envious.... oh boy, i am also a boy like you so i don't know what a woman feels during sex but after reading this, oh boy, let's just say that my 'little brother' (LOL) is rather hard right now and i am actually sweating too...
I salute you and give my full respect to your Lemon skills, you're freaking awesome and i MEAN it, keep writing, you rock.
Oh yeah, if you're ever puzzled on why i hold the title "God of Lemons", feel free to check out my stories as well, i have three epic fics and i also have two fics which are composed of a series of One-shots, then there is my LONGEST one-shot "Loneliness of the Free Wind", it's my first completed fic and it's about Kagura as well, though she is paired with an OC of mine, i have received nothing but positive feedback about my OC... in fact, my OC could have been nominated to Inuyasha fanguild's "Best OC" section but because the story is old and was not published during the year 2005, it was rejected...
Anyway, if you're ever interested, feel free to stop by and read my fics, if you don't know how to use the search here on AFF.net, Email me and i'll send you the link since i'm also an author here.
Man, this is the longest review i've written in a while, hopefully you aren't offended by my little... 'advertisement' above but i really would like to hear your opinnion on my stories as well because you have such a high level of skill...
see ya!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I would just like to say that was the most incredible Kagura and Sesshomaru pairing I have ever read! Congrats on your excellent writing and the wonderfully detailed description of their joining! This has been one of the better stories that I have read! Thanks again for writing such a magnificent piece of work!
Inusgirl
Inusgirl
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, you portray their relationship in a very intersting light. however i kept going back and forth from thinking 'wow this is really awsome description' to thinking 'cheezy porn' thats no offence to you but really i laughed when you described sesshomaru's not so mini sessh. it was good comidic relief in the middle of such an intense peice... even if it wasn't meant to be. you have talent and i hope we will see more of your work soon ^-^.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is WOW!!!! This story is steaming good and if only I could have that chance with Sesshomaru I would love it too... I wonder what Naraku will say and do about Kagura and Sesshomaru's mating....Definitely needs another chapter. Really good hot streamy fic... I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa! very good! and...damn! quite a lemon! although all i could think about is how much i wanted sess to go find naraku and take back kagura's heart...
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow. That had to be the longest and most elaborately written lemon I have ever read. It was awsome! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I can't believe how hot this is. I love Sesshoumaru/Kagura pairings. Very nicely done. You added a deeper meaning to the simple act of Sesshoumaru seeking his release and Kagura wishing for some hope. It's a great story, and even though you already said it is a one-shot, I would love to see what would happen next. How will Kagura escape Naraku, and what will become of their pup? Please write more.