Scream

Hello!

This is Scream, a one-chapter story that I have written as a self-contained test of my lemon-writing skills. I figure that it would be a good idea to see what kind of reaction it garners before Battlefield 1542 gets to the lemon stage. Also, its sheer raunchiness will justify my existence on this site.

Scream was actually part of BF1542 at one point, but I didn't want to show Sesshoumaru as an adulterer, so I axed that scene, but rewired and rebuilt it into a one-shot. It's a long one too; it is bigger than all BF1542 chapters put together, weighing in at nearly 80 kB in Notepad.

Please read, rate, and review!

DISCLAIMER:

All InuYasha characters and ideas belong to Rumiko Takahashi.

The song "Scream" belongs to Billy Idol.

**lights fuse**

**tosses lemon**

**runs away**

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Reply to reviews:

-Anon (I think this is shorthand for anonymous, or it could be that dude from Witch Hunter Robin, not sure), 4-19-2005

Ah, arigatou! I'm glad you liked the lemon! I've never written anything quite like that before, and it is highly experimental in nature. As for Sesshoumaru reclaiming Kagura's heart, I've relegated that quest to Android Seventeen in BF1542 (hint, hint, lol) Thanks again!

-ghettoside_gangsta, 4-19-2005

Thank you! To "hear" someone say it was the most elaborate lemon they had ever read is a great compliment, because there have been some long, graphic lemons on this site. It is good to know that someone thinks so highly of mine with those floating around. As for future work, I have BF1542 to play with, and some other ideas that I came up with, which include:

An Android 16/Bulma/Vegeta M/F/M one-shot
A Kibito-kai/Yomiko Readman crossover between Read Or Die and DBZ
An Android 16/Ghost in the Shell crossover

I might not get to these for a while, as BF1542 is my current flagship fic, and Shizuka Kaze has expressed interest in a continuation of this fic (entirely do-able, with more lemony goodness highly probable)

-Shizuka Kaze, 4-19-2005

Hey, praise from a veteran author! w00t! I'm glad you like the story, and I think I can, in fact, expand it into a longer fic. One way I can think of is to write the current chapter as the ending, then put in lead-in chapters behind it, so as to better explain Sess and Kagura's relationship (and to off Naraku somehow), plus more lemons that build up to final one. Another and significantly darker way would be to write the current chapter as the middle of the story, add lead-in, then tell a tale of Kagura's torture after Naraku finds out about her trysts with Sess. If I do expand the fic, I'll probably lean torward the first method, because Method Two would be probably wind up being a bit grisly and is territory treaded upon previously by the author Arty. That aside, Kagura will be a character of focus in BF1542, so her tale will not go untold, at any rate. Thanks again for your positive review!

-Anon, 4-20-2005

Well, since it is likely that I will add to this story, InuYasha and Kagome will probably make an appearance, but their role would be minor, maybe helping out to kill Naraku. The lemons would be almost entirely Sess/Kagura, plus some non-con-ISH Naraku/Kagura to piss Sess off. Therefore, I don't think there would be much space for a Inu/Kag pairing in the plotline. Sorry!

-inusgirl, 4-20-2005

Good reviews just keeping rolling on in! You are quite welcome, and I am quite thankful for your review. Also, your list of excellent one-shots makes your praise all that more meaningful.


-Cassie, 4-20-2005

Ah, more positivity! I'm glad you enjoyed it, as this is my first lemon and I was unsure of how it would fare. Do not worry, I've got a few ideas for continuing.

-Zelix, 4-20-2005

Heh, no need to introduce yourself. I know exactly who you are, and I do appreciate what your praise means. I came across Loneliness of the Free Wind during the summer of last year, drawn to it because of the mention of Kagura in a lemon. Back then, I think you had it organized in chapter-by-chapter form, instead of posted as one giant super-chapter, but either way, the lemon was indeed excellent. Then came The Sinners in all of its super-high-powered lemony goodness. Wow. Unforgettable.

I think your title "God of All Lemons" is appropriate, for your lemons are to AFF.net what Saving Private Ryan was to war movies. Not many fics are quite that visceral, tastefully done, or so erotically entertaining. You cram each one to the gills with sheer, graphic detail, not skipping not moment of the act, making it quite clear what is going on (lol), yet at the same time making it coherent and re-readable.

Rest assured, the meaning of your enjoyment of my story is not wasted on me.

Arigatou!

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