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for Scream

by Dunkelgelb

person MistressKagome4U
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Wow... completly... wow... im... speechless... i want more.. please write more... i love you... please write more... i crave it like Seshomaru craves his desirable wind mate...
Im begging for more.....

MistressKagome4U
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...nice
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT
person no name for now
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Seriously, that's the hottest lemon story that ever read in my life. I swear to god it is. Wow...
person FOX
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm obsess with Sesshomaru and Kagura pairing the story is one of the BEST the BEST the BEST the BEST that i have read i hope that you write more SOON.
person Piggi
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to applaude your talent. I truely think ucaptured the essence of this realtionship. Although there are many Rin/Sess fics, it seems that the ppl are forgetting that its not possible. There are sites with rock hard edvidence that proves that Sess was suppose to be wit Kagura. But that is not wat i want to tell you. I want to thanks for a job done to well. I love the way you stuck to there character. Unlike most kagu/sess stories, you understood there personality and created something that seemed so fitting. There is no words that i can give to show my gratitude. Thank you doesn't seem enough. But i have another question, would you be sticking to the manga? I bet you have already heard that Kagura was killed off before the series ended. Right? These are jux questions that have been swimming around my head for sometime now, you can answer them or not. That is all i wanted to say. And once again, Thank you...
person anon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just- wow. this is probably one of the hottest fics i have ever read ever. i'd LOVE to see this story continued, but i dont know how it could possibly be topped! excellent, excellent work.
person Diane
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well as far as I'm concerned you do lemons quite well. You did strike one of my pet peeves though, the past tense of thrust is still thrust there is no thrusted.
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Impressive, particularly on description. Plus, it's nice to see someone do a different pairing for once.
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, maybe you could do a second chapter with Inuyasha and Kagome?