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Okay, wow, I am highly impressed with your vocabulary. Honestly, in reading lemon stories, I see the same words exhausted over and over again, but you suprised me with your variety of words...and I honestly don't think you need to worry about your lemon writing abilities. It has been proven. Awesome job.

Hi... I'm back again. I just had to read your story one more time, and I truly believe my last review was not fitting for this story. THIS WAS SO DAMN HOT my toenails started to curl! I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story (or how much my partner will reap the benefits of it for the next week! ~_^) But one thing that gets me absolutely stumped, and it's not only this story, but a few others that I have read here on AFF, but is it just fiction, or is it actually possible to penetrate a womans cervix the way that you described? It's got my mind boggling to the point that I actually asked my sex-crazed neighbour and SHE couldn't even tell me... Wouldn't that just hurt like hell? The concept is incredibly horny, but all I know is that it ouches a great deal just having the other half thrust too deep let alone penetrating my cervix... yeah, yeah I know... I feel like an idiot for asking but the ol' grey matter just can't stop ticking over the embarressing question... and what's even more embarressing is that I thought I was pretty sexually aware *doh!* Mental Note to me: Run off and go to some medical sex website and find out if I don't hear back!

Apart from that, I just love the way you composed that hot little number. Not only was it hot, but the characters were true to their personas and it was everything you would expect from our dear fluffy-sama and our lovely Kagura-chan (who I personally think would be the most realistic mate for our stoic lord, even though I'm a crazed Sango fiend ^_^) Your writing conveys that you are a very sensual person by nature, so keep up the top work chicky-babe (that is if you are even a chicky-babe!) and I look forward to checking out Battlefield next.

Peace badgirl,

Original Sinner

Oh my f*cking goodness! *pauses momentarily to catch breath* You are so, so, sooooo baaadddd!!! What in Gods name was that?! That would have to be the hottest f*cking story I have ever read in my whole entire life! Ok... now to check your other fic out...

Scream is excallent. Kagura and Sesshoumaru are made for each other.

WOW! that was way hotter than anything I could ever come up with! That really made my night! It's amazing they could still blink after all that. Yeah you get the blue ribbon for best lemon of the month. Well So far at least.

Check out my stories if you have the time!

See ya soon.

ok dude...the fic was going good until you contradicted yourself. in the cave when sessh gets undressed, kagura acts surprised...like its the first time she's seen him naken when supposedly they've been rutting around for months. i don't know if i misunderstood or what but i just thought i'd let you know.

o and let's be realistic here...3 inches wide and 10 inches long is a little too much even for a demon. i did like where this story was going (as far as a lemon can go ^^) but it contradicted itself and was a little far-fetched.

Wow! Absolutely wow! You are such a talented writer and I would really love to see this story continued, please continue.

I must say you are VERY VERYX1,000 talented. I was blown away (literaly) by how you displayed everything so wonderful. And what I adored the most was that you kept the characters to their orignial form. Even though Sesshomaru said " I love you" it was done in a very believeable way. I don't believe I found one flaw in the entire passage. It was truely...aahh words fail me now. But either way I always come back to read this...thank you for writing this...
-Jen

...i forgot to breath...need i say more, lol. i can't believe i didn't read this fic before, it is truly the best i've ever, ever read. please, please update.

holy crap that was hot! i really enjoyed this lemon. one of the best i have read so far. i really look forward to some more lemons in the future!! *hint hint*