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for Scream

by Dunkelgelb

person Kagome
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn when you said all night you meant it!! WONDERFUL JOB WITH ONE OF MY FAV. COUPLES!!! Will there be a sequeal? Personaly I don't care. If you leave it here, it's perfect, if you choose to continue it will still be perfect. ^^ Great job!!
person StoryJunkie
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that you missed one detail
This was more than poetic. This was elegant.
If I wore a hat, it would be off.
You have awed me.
er....did you have to pause between each paragraph and er...(ahem) relieve yourself? Because I very nearly had to. Except for the part that made me gag, but only because of your masterful description.
Wow. A work of art.
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow. That was one of the hottest fanfics I've ever read, if not the hottest; beautifully written. My story is complete crap in comparison to that, I humbly bow to you.
person Original Sinner (NSI)
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My knight in shining armour *gushes* Thanks for the sweet review sweetpea.... and thanks for the sneak peak of your story ~_^. Will have to drop you a few lines. *Purrs in contentment*

Peace
person Jack
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO! I ahve not sen such a sensually amazing piece in a long time, I mean seriously, you write like a god. Magnfique magnifique!
person lynia
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
five star all the way. a beautiful and well written work of art.very nice .very nice should put in the fanfic hall of fame
person Amanda
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You shoud make a 2nd one... one were she goes back to Naraku or he comes for her... and also their life with the pup... this has to be the best fanfic I have ever read... keep up it up and don't stop something your good at. ^.^
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, you are so awesome!
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo, that was the hottest fic I ever read.

WOW

(I have returned. I have also updated my fic "a pair like no other")

(I have a new computer)

Hee hee
person Max
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to know just one thing...do you ever plan on writing the other chapters to Scream? cuz i know you want more attention for your other fic ( sorry, but i personally kinda avoid crossovers ) but this is such a great fic, it's a shame to let it go off like this. please, please continue the story, or like write a fill-in sex scene cuz i just love how you write. honestly, i'm like panting and sweating so bad right now just from reading your fic. so please keep it up, please