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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way your fic is coming along. It's very in chacter. But i do have a question will you make Kagome able to transform in to a full demon or will she stay a half demon. It's okay if you don't answer if it messes you the story but I am just dieing to know...
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far so please keep going. As for grammar and spelling, I did not notice any glaring errors, mind you spelling is not my strong suit. The story flows well so you would not notice any small slip ups. If you are concered try proofing it on this site, I find it very helpful, and it is free.
http://www.spellcheck.net/
http://www.spellcheck.net/
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. It has wonderful potential. Keep it up, I'd love to read more of it!
~Ralina~
~Ralina~
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this sucks
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic, it is different. I have been getting bored lately it seems all IY fics are starting to mimic each other. Not on purpose I know, but there is only so much that can be done. I hope he has to work for her, don't just let her fall into bed with him, you have a good start, don't rush it.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhhh my ggggoooossshhhhh that was awesome i cannot wait till you update man ive got to know who disturbed youko's mind. its so exciting cant wait till they get to the lemons anyway see you next time
ja ne
ja ne
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that it is wonderful. You have a good story here and I hope that you continue it. I am totally enjoying the story.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! No1inparticular it's about time.... Oh you don't know how long I have actually waited for you to post this story.... I loved it on fanfiction or was it mediaminor anyways i hope you finish the story.... You can't leave a cliffy like that and not update.... I need more, I want more...... So send more.... Come on I'm waiting! Poor Kagome what is she to do?
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Watch out for the mistakes, tho.
Keep up the good work and try to make the love
relationships real. Let them evolve slowly. Reeeally
slowly...-_-; Update as soon as you can!
Keep up the good work and try to make the love
relationships real. Let them evolve slowly. Reeeally
slowly...-_-; Update as soon as you can!