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person Maku
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is great i'm kinda leaning towards both kurama and youko but whatever you pick will be great i'm sure. ^^
person sweetsakurablossoms
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. The personality touches of Youko are flawless, and Kagome's spitfire is definitely perfect. All in all you have provided an excellent story to enchant the mind!
person Vyncent
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Please, please! This story just would not be quite the same without a lemon. Ya just gotta do a lemon......
person puff
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make it a youko/kagome fic pretty please with a cherry on top .

p.s
put in a LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
PLEASE LLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

I KNOW I'M SUCH A HENTAI

from your number one fan puff
person Diane
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it but I did notice you made a common mistake; hanyou = dog ears on top of the head so no going up the neck to the earlobe [which she wouldn't exactly have anyway]. To get to her ears he'd have to go up till he had her face against his chest.
person amuro
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Just wanted to say this is a great fic. I can't wait untill you update it again. It's one of the best fanfics I've read lately. Keep it up!!
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, great storyline you got here. only thing i have to say is just make your chapters longer LOL ~_^
cause i start reading and I get lost in the chapter and then it's all over ;(
other then that it's awesome
thanks for the great read
person Lizzie
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I like it. Im not a good rewiewer, I just wanted to let you know I like it.
Sincerely Lizzie
person Kagomereborn-Nsi
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn good...keep it up..please email me if you can when you update..arigato
person Cindy
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, I love how Kagome's character is strong. I can't wait for more. so PLEASE update soon!!!!