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schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I think it would be cool if kags became preg her first time with three kits and Yoko adopted shippo in the manor of a demon adoption and had kags do so too before she left for the future for good. In doing so she could take on some kitsune traits as well and maybe midkro sp? could make her more powerful for an evil to come in her time period by giving her tenshi powers or god like powers and teach her to master all her skills.... just a thought smiles
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far. i think it would b great for her to get a mate mark before she goes to kouga :P your doing a wonderful job on this. keep up the great work and update this again soon please
person ptbear
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens if and when Kagome returns to the future.
person inuyoukai8
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Woohooo! When do we get the next installment?
person kags
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i'm really intrigued with ur story and think its really great so far
person Rion
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Great chapter, and I just had to review before moving on. I think it was the language thing. -__- Right. Um, lessie. I already said nice chapter, but the only thing that made me twitch was that Youko defined the antidote, which to me sounds a bit too powerful. maybe it's just me, but I think it would have gone smoother had he just knelt there and given it to Inuyasha. meh.

By the way, the way to say 'do you understand?' in Japanese is Wakari masu ka? - wakari being the literal translation for understand, masu being a general ending, in this case addressing someone, and ka being the question. Do you understand? Understand you do? oO; sounds like Yoda...
person Bree McGregor
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE finish this one first!!! I understand about school and other life stuff getting in the way. but i realy like this story! i always loved Kurama and Kagome stories. Im not sure why... but i do...PLEASE keep working on this one and update more offten! I realy LOVE this story!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sad... is youko dead or did he just fall unconscious? update soon i wanna noe wut happens!!!
person Cancan227
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Youko What? NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
person Kougalover123
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great....please keep updating.