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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Aww Miroku was so badly longing for the taiyoukai. Loved the description on how everything was beautiful to Miroku. A simple smile to laughter, to the beauty of Sesshoumaru. It makes you stand back and think of how precious a smile can be. Please continue on when you can with this….Really good job!!!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was AWESOME! i love this pairing! maybe because the first yaoi i've ever read was a sess/miro. it was so sweet! (short summary) sesshoumaru takes miroku as his captor or whatever thing and then they fall in love. inuyasha and the gang come to sesshou's house/castle kind of destroy it, they take miroku back , but when miroku wakes up he wants to go back to sesshoumar (i forgot what happens next) anyway, miroku goes back sesshoumaru and it's happily ever after! ^^ i love your story!! please update when you can!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..never really though of that kinda pairing..but i like it^^ hehehe.. a very nice first chapter
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait until the chap!!!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. You already have me totolly worked up. Damn! You are truly one of the best writers on AFF so I don't think you need to worry about this being your first yaoi fic. Just don't hold back and go for. ^_~ I know you'll do a wonderful job. I also love the way you wrote this in Sesshy's POV, nicely done. CYA next time.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is looking really interesting… I love the thought process Sesshoumaru was having… Please continue on with this…cannot wait to see the next chapter!!! 0,0’
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i never send out flames. but i don't really leave a review unless i really want the story to cont. so here i go: i hope you get to the good stuff soon. i like and pairing with miroku in it, but i don't like any naraku pairings.
so anyway, i like your story and i hope you update soon.
p.s. i like it when the author/authoress thank their reviewers in thier story, it makes me feel special^_^V
so anyway, i like your story and i hope you update soon.
p.s. i like it when the author/authoress thank their reviewers in thier story, it makes me feel special^_^V
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWOOOOO! I love it! I like it in seeing how someone as brooding and someone always lost in thoughts like Sesshoumaru is...he WOULD develop a type of obsession over someone! ^^;; I can't wait till you write more and seeing how you write...the lemon should be just as good too! ^^;;
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
miroku yaoi is love!!! this ff is so well written!! i can't wait till the next chappy!! also, do you think you should move this into the yaoi subcategory?
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....this story is so good! You are an excellent writer...wow!!
I absolutely love the First Person POV, always one fo my favorite things about a story, the first person. Especially in this story, with Sesshomaru telling the whole thing, it is boarderline amazing. I mean, really, though, you characterize him so well! It is totally believable, really really!!! I loved the way he had such a hard time accepting his feelings for Miroku, it was very fitting for his character. Wanting to kill him....omg, if that wasn't exactly what Sesshomaru would do, what is, (I mean that seriously, by the way)?
The plot is also very interesting. One kind of wonders why Sesshomaru does trail inuyasha so much...it couldn't be only for a sword, as good as the sword is....that doesn't make much sense. I like your version better.
The ending was so suspenseful...Guessing: Miroku feels the same way about Sesshomaru. I mean, I'm only guessing like I said, but it totally seemed like that was the case, which makes the story all the better because now you have bonafide romance on your hands! Although...the depths of the love is yet to be defined on Miroku's side...hmmm...such intrigue!!! I think Miroku loves Sesshomaru, (who wouldn't?). Even if he does, though, will their relationship be kept in secret or will it be allowed to blossom openly? I guess the former because with Inuyasha so hateful towards his taiyoukai half-brother, anything even hinting of romance with him would have to be secret, (even more so for one of his own friends). Such intrigue!
So, yeah, I really don't know what I'll do with myself until you update...this story is fabulous, you couldn't even tell it was your first time writing yaoi...is it really? That seems so weird...you're already so good at it!!
(PS: Since I am not registered on aff, I won't be able to tell when you update, so please send me an e-mail when you do!! Thank you!!)
--Mizu Inu
I absolutely love the First Person POV, always one fo my favorite things about a story, the first person. Especially in this story, with Sesshomaru telling the whole thing, it is boarderline amazing. I mean, really, though, you characterize him so well! It is totally believable, really really!!! I loved the way he had such a hard time accepting his feelings for Miroku, it was very fitting for his character. Wanting to kill him....omg, if that wasn't exactly what Sesshomaru would do, what is, (I mean that seriously, by the way)?
The plot is also very interesting. One kind of wonders why Sesshomaru does trail inuyasha so much...it couldn't be only for a sword, as good as the sword is....that doesn't make much sense. I like your version better.
The ending was so suspenseful...Guessing: Miroku feels the same way about Sesshomaru. I mean, I'm only guessing like I said, but it totally seemed like that was the case, which makes the story all the better because now you have bonafide romance on your hands! Although...the depths of the love is yet to be defined on Miroku's side...hmmm...such intrigue!!! I think Miroku loves Sesshomaru, (who wouldn't?). Even if he does, though, will their relationship be kept in secret or will it be allowed to blossom openly? I guess the former because with Inuyasha so hateful towards his taiyoukai half-brother, anything even hinting of romance with him would have to be secret, (even more so for one of his own friends). Such intrigue!
So, yeah, I really don't know what I'll do with myself until you update...this story is fabulous, you couldn't even tell it was your first time writing yaoi...is it really? That seems so weird...you're already so good at it!!
(PS: Since I am not registered on aff, I won't be able to tell when you update, so please send me an e-mail when you do!! Thank you!!)
--Mizu Inu