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by whirleeq

person Snowfall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I mean really, wow. Your lemons are really hot. I can't wait for the next one.
person Snowfall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet and passionate. I enjoyed it very much. Is there more? Mm? Mm?

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic, you are definitely very talented. I look forward to reading future chapters to this story. Update soon please.
person blacknoise
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully hot and also perfectly in character. Your Miroku is just right. I'm not sure about uke Sesshoumaru, but I never am. You sure wrote him convincingly, though.
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job, I like how you explained their thoughts, that can make or break any type of story.

Very good job
person Lisa
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... Wow. Outstanding. Whew. *turns the A/C on to its highest setting* More, please. This is an absolute gem of a fic, well-written.
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i would love to join them!!! please finsh this story great visuals!!
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O so good! but you are so a tease! i thought i would get the next installment, but alas! i had the same lime! but, it waas a really good idea! 2 different pov's. pulled it off very well!!! yey for you!
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAF!!!!! Oh man I liked Sessy's thoughts and they were sexy and Miroku is sexy too but damn this was so funny my husband kept asking me what was making me laugh like a hyena. I just adore how you write Miroku the thoughts that go threw his head kill me. The whole what Inuyasha would say in the same position perspective thing just slayed me. And the Fangs! I was wondering how you were planning on having the next 'encounter' go as Sess can't really recopicate with his sharp teeth. Miroku's wondering what his fluffy was, was quite amusing. I know this was supposed to be sexy more than funny and oh yeah it was sexy but this really just made me laugh I love humorous lemons. YOU ROCK!!!! Oh yeah and the disclamer to this was classic I died. ^_^
person sirhcnotlih
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.

5 out of 5!

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