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for Best Served Cold

by Nekohime

person himikoatlarge
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was so good. it brought tears to my eyes and very few have been able to do that, so i must contragulate you, you have done a wonderful job.

i have a question?

is this a mpreg?

plz plz make it one......

and UPDATE SOON, i know its the same two words all other reviwers have written and it might get pretty boring but i couldn't stop myself.

i have to know what happens next and soon and boy that was a big chapter, exactly to my liking, now you got yourself a loyal fan....
person akira
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic, loved it, update soon
person chibiinupuppy
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sniffle sniffle waaaaaaaaaaaaaaHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so so sad, plz someone hand me a tissue, no 2 no 3,4,5 i can't stop crying oh please please have mercy and update as soon as you can or i will die of dehydration by then, i need some immediate inu-kouga comforting NOW!!!!!
person My Reflection
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did a fine job. I didn't notice anything out of place, but then again I kept getting interrupted while reading. Oh well.
This is the third answer to this challange I have read and yours has a lot of feeling to it. I can tell you worked hard on it. Thank you and please continue.
person Dante
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that's one dark story. I wasn't planning on reading the entire thing right now but once I started my heart wouldn't stop pounding until I got to the end. Good Job.
D_
person yumi557
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was such a good start, more more more!!!!! plz plz plz and soon
person J@DE
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes this was indeed a dark chapter of this story. I like what you have so far aqn dI can't wait till you post more. Lets hope what was made wrong can be put right in the end. Hope to read MORE soon!!! : )
person miyu-chan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i *sniffle* don't *sniffle* no *sniffle* what *sniffle* to *sniffle* say? that was so so sad.... oh boy i needed a whole box of tissue still.. *sniffle* well... this is the best dark fic or rather chapter i have read till now. you are truely a great great writer.... i just loved it... boy that was intence i can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapters *sniffle again*
person ahiru-chan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg.... that was one great chapter... trully man you're simply awesome. never has a challenge fic been able to bring a tear to my eyes but you managed it.... amazing.... bravo!!!! what more can i say? except plz plz i absoultely beg you down on my knees do update soon, can't wait for the next chappie
person atsuko
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah!!! that was best among all the fic or the writers who answered the challenge to kougasmate. i can't imgaine the details... that was simply beautiful.... oh god it was so good..... now please do update soon i am dying here....