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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK!!! how could you?!?! here i was, looking foreward to a nice Kouga/Inuyasha fic, and THIS SHIT HAPPENS TO CROSS MY PATH!!!
HEE-Hee Great story, i love angst, but i do feel bad for our two favorite guys.... Write more... and PLEASE LEAVE OUT M-PREG!!! its stupid, immoral, and
against every law of nature ever written. it just cant happen.
HEE-Hee Great story, i love angst, but i do feel bad for our two favorite guys.... Write more... and PLEASE LEAVE OUT M-PREG!!! its stupid, immoral, and
against every law of nature ever written. it just cant happen.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was messed up! So naturally, I liked it. :) Seriously though, I think you did a good job with a very difficult challenge. The ending is very heart-breaking and well done.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH wow! this is starting out great! please continue! i beg you! Yours is definately the best response to the challenge.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been trying my best not to read other stories to the challenge but . . . I can't resist . . . Hehehe.
Anyway, I love what you've done. Very intense. Had me in tears when I read it. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. Do Kagome and the others hear that howl? Do they come rushing to find out what happened? How are they going to react?
Since my story to the challenge is winding down, I can beta for you if you still don't have one. I've noticed a lot of run-on sentences in your work. It leaves a slightly breathless feeling . . . and detracts a bit from the reading. Given that you finished writing around 5 a.m., it's understandable. So . . . I'm offering to beta if you still need one. :)
Anyway, I love what you've done. Very intense. Had me in tears when I read it. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. Do Kagome and the others hear that howl? Do they come rushing to find out what happened? How are they going to react?
Since my story to the challenge is winding down, I can beta for you if you still don't have one. I've noticed a lot of run-on sentences in your work. It leaves a slightly breathless feeling . . . and detracts a bit from the reading. Given that you finished writing around 5 a.m., it's understandable. So . . . I'm offering to beta if you still need one. :)
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad! :'(
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
That is possibly the best rape story I have ever read.
You rock.
That is possibly the best rape story I have ever read.
You rock.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far very sad. I like it. Inu and Koga are one of my favorite pairing so I'm looking forward to this. Please keep going ^_^
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was awesome! I hope that there is going to be more really soon! I like how this is going so don't change a thing!
plz plz update soon, your spelling and grammr was alright so no worry, thus continue
plz plz update soon, your spelling and grammr was alright so no worry, thus continue
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally cool. this story is great, i have read and reread it thrice but still cannot seem to get enough of it, you do write like a pro. plz plz do update soon
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah another answer to kuogamate's challenge and by far the best one in its own way. i loved the details you put in and the way you show inuyasha's rape and his spirit breaking. it was tytally awesome. please continue i am hungry for more and soon