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person nutter butter
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love MSTs, and you do them well :) I hope you keep posting.
person raven
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I just finished reading your latest chapter - including the flame one - and I just have to say that I understand your annoyance. I enjoy reading your work and laughing at your sarcasm. Love sarcasm to death! Even though - I'm sorry to say - I have written my own s/k, I agree with you on your comments about every single story being the same. No, I'm not a hypocrite, I'm honest. I agree with you that s/k could probably never be (hell, the chances of them getting together are probably .0001 in 1 billion) but i go for the wierder pairings. Anyways, I'm sure I bored you - it wasn't my intention - but I'm not very good with reviews, since they are very rare for me.

Thank you for gifting me with many minutes of rolling around on the floor and laughing. I appreciate your style and your efforts! As far as spelling goes - i don't see why people are so uptight about it. Finding spelling mistakes is probably the hardest part about writing. (That's why I wish I had an editor for my stuff). Just please keep writing (if you have time) and I look forward to your next update! Thank you!

person Navassa
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Original fanfics....is there such a thing? I agree with whomever it was that said you should get the author's permission to do this (and I'm not saying this to be rude, I'm seriously suggesting it). I'm sure half of them would gladly allow you to.

As for flames...flames are inevitable whether you tell them to not bother or not. There's going to be people out there who won't give a rats ass that you write "no flames" or not.

As for your writing, you have some amusing anecdotes in these stories you're...what is it? MSTing?

Oh and I thank you for your comment about "the grammer and writting is somewhat beautiful, and the author could write something intresting if they tired harder", I agree. My grammer and writing did suck back then. Since then I've gone through 2 years of intensive English courses as a Major of English at my state University with an Emphasis in Creative writing. I'm still shoddy sometimes but I'm getting better. As for sess/kag pairings...I can't honestly say I've abandoned that but it has been sometime. Too many books to read (now I know why they say it's not a good idea to take more than 3 English courses a semester.)

Anyway, a friendly (and I stress friendly) word of advice: try to get the author's permission to do this. I don't give a rat's ass about My Immortal or even Voices at Midnight for that matter, but some one will someday and what you're doing IS against adultfanfiction's policy.
person Tina
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can delete this if you want, but you're one big fucking hypocrite if you think no one is going to flame you for your blatant smearing of other authors' works. First of all, your writing is total crap. Why don't you practice what you preach and open up a grammar and punctuation book before criticising other authors.

Second, who died and made you the high and mighty Emperor of "Good Writing"

Get a fucking life....and write something original instead of bashing other peoples' hard work.
person foxykittykat
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! please add my story "We did WHAT?!" to this I don't know what possessed me to write it. Please? Update soon!
person foxykittykat
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! keep writing please! It would be funny if sesshomaru made a guest appearance (my opinion)
person Jackie (J-Chan)
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY!

See!? I told you people would love you're story if you put it up! I'm the friend that recommended her to put the story up! Me!

Me! I was the friend that told you to put it up! ME! That's me, you're best friend/cousin! Jackie! ME I'm Jackie! I love you!

Write more chapters, or I steal you're whip and have my master use it on me! Mwhahahaha!

Me! I was the one who recommeded her to put it up! ME!
person Psycho_Sisters
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! Ha...that was so hilarious. I must bow down and worship your writing. *Bows down and falls on her face* Well, I was never accused of being graceful! Okay, my lame attempts at being funny are finished now. For real, I love what you did with this. Those fanfics were SO horrible! I even read the first paragraph of My Immortal before this. Yeah, then I got bored and clicked the back button. I was able to suffer through it with your wonderful social commentary though! This was genius. Pure hilarity. Can't wait to see what you bash next!
person Kiki Ortega
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. No really, it was. The first couple of chapters did sorta suck, but this last one was hilarious. I read one in ff.net a couple of weeks... months... ago in which an author bashed a couple of alternate pairings.... like Sango/InuYasha, Kikyo w/ any guy because of the fact that she's dead, Miroku/Kagome, Sesshoumaru/Kagome, etc. Don't get me wrong, I love these alternate pairings. It's fun though to have a laugh every now and then. Oh... and again... I loved the last chapter, My Immortal. Do continue.
person BluePuppy (not logged on)
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee hee hee. In case you don't know what 'hee' means its my idiotic way of expressing laughter through words. But then again I could always say : 'Slouching forward on the bed, she cupped a hand to her mouth in an attempt to muffle the uncontrolable giggles that passed through her lips.' But I will take a apage out of the writing of someone you flamed and just tell you that I'm too lazy.

Hilarious! Keep up the bashing. I really need some comedy to spice up my normally manic depressive lifestyle.

And I'm gueesing that if milk reminds you of .... that, then I guess you don' really like mayo either, eh?
Just kidding. But please, do continue.