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for Shadow's of Darkness

by Azuka

person Benzaiten
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adored chapter 5.I see that theres more closeness between Kagome and Sesshomaru.....but i hope to see a lemon....i am not rushing you...please take your time....i have patience saved for you...anyway update soon onegai.Thankyou for this amazing story...if i could i would give it an oscar ^.^ Ja ne
person Ookami K.
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story you gotta keep updating so exciting and I love the beating Sesshy chap. loved it lots gotta have more... Keep up the good work...
person Benzaiten
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...cool. Chapter 4 was interesting.But I didn't like the part about Azuka and Naraku being mates(i felt a slight tinge of jealously and my blood almost boiled V.V) .I still can't believe that Sesshomaru-sama actually apologized to Inuyasha O.O - uh, still waiting for the lemon ^.^ ' did i mention i hate kikyo..oh yeah i did. Can't wait for chapter 5.please update soon.

S.O.S: Need Lemon


Ja ne ,
Benzaiten
person Darkflame
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your fanfic.such fantabulous work.please update soon.i want more mushy stuff ^__^
person Diane
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well the plot seems good. The spelling, grammar & sentence structure are really bad though & I think I've seen at least 7 different misspellings of Sesshoumaru throughout the 4 chapters.
person Benzaiten
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...its my most fav of all i have read(so far)shhh!!! In the 2nd ch you called kagome kat and then in the 3rd ch you named her kit...i'm confused which one is it? So 1 year in the Underworld is one day in the feudal era?how long can kagome stay in their world?does sesshomaru-sama like kagome?is kikyo gonna die ^.^(i hate her..i'm sorry if you are a kikyo fan...are you?)?when is naraku appearing?And finally WHERE IS THE LEMON?!!!!!my perverted little mind is dying to read one.I know you must think i am very annoying...hee-hee,but i'm not.I am very deadly T.T ....Hoo-hah! i scared you ...*laughss hysterically*hahahahah.
ok nice reviewing to you .. Ja ne
person Cassie
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but something I was wondering if Azuka and Sesshomaru are sister and brother then what is his relation to Kagome nad what about Shippo why did he call Azuza mother. And is Sesshomaru and Shippo uncle and nephew. Please reveil all in the next chapter can't wait to read. update soon
person a
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
person a
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
person binab86
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i like this story alot please update soon