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Hey, love the fic so far. looking back you have a lot of small mistakes that could easily be fixed. If you want i'll beta future chapters and have no problems with going back and pointing out the mistakes in earlier chapters. Main problems seems to be small spelling errors. in chapter one you use the phrase hole body and it should be Whole body. and a couple places you placed the wrong name in a spot. Not hard to figure out what the story is supposed to mean but it interrupts the flow a little. Still, the story is a great story and feel free to e-mail me and i'll help you catch all the small mistakes. or atleast a great deal of them.

e-mail: ValheruYaoi@yahoo.com

you know... you're turning this story into a super angst... is that your intention? i mean they've been depressed for what- twenty chapters now or something? and i didn't even now inu and souta were really together, because you've completely skipped any romanticism after they mated. is this going to be a death fic were everyone kills themselves? i really do love your way of writing, but that'd be a bit too much

Keep going man keep going, I cannot wait to see what Kagome's reaction would be to Souta being mated to Inuyasha. A "Sit" festival most likely, if Kagome doesn't just faint dead away period.

And Souta's mom? OMG.

But I loved it, but it would be so much better if there was another chapter with the revelations revealed to all others in the group.

Grr… evil, evil cliffies! Though the mental image of Koga in the school uniform was a very nice consolation, hopefully the familiar sent is something safe like Naraku or a horde of fire spitting demons… I’d hate to see what Kagome is going to do when she finds out that she lost her precious puppy to her little bro.

ohhh...and update! nothing lovelier than an update! i sooo love your story, it's the best i've ever read!

Very nice story.......hope Inuyasha and Kouga get it on though. That would be sweet........

What's with all the narcoleptic fits?

great chapter, souta is so cute and understanding in his naive way... and kouga and inuyashas "friendship" have developed some more, you are great at describing the characters and their relationships!

I love it, not only did we get some ”Inuyasha being nice to Kouga” goodness but also a side of Kouga getting a little better. Sweeeeeeet. I did happen to notice that in chap. # 5 it says “For someone like Souta who didn’t like math in the first place,… “ but chap. #27 has “Math. Souta didn't know why, but he loved math out of every other subject he'd ever taken.” Who knew that training in the feudal era, rescuing your half-demon mate, and cleaning a snow floded house would have such a dramatic change on ones favored subjects in school.

Awe, cuddled up with ice cream, very cute. Maybe there is a chance of some more Inu/Koga action after all. Yay! I think Sota and Hojo will understand.