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And I thick you should chage it to rud in Jaken face in later chapters

i like the story and the wierd twist so please add a new chapter soon

I really enjoyed your story, you have an awesome thing going on here. But your grammar is pretty bad, but so is mine so don't feel too bad about it. I went back and read the other two chapters to remember the whole story. I thought you might want to know that Kneerow isn't a japanese name. I don't know if this story is set in Japan or not, but the first names are Japanese and adding a last name that is Japanese would be cool. If you wanted to change his name you could write it as Niro. But that's just a suggestion and you are the writer. I can't wait to read the next chap, I'm a loyal fan, and thanks for sharing.

P.S. I'm glad you're back to writing the story, I checked almost every week to see if you updated and when you did I said "YAYNESS!!!"
Ok I'll leave you alone now.

Come on what are you waiting for update!

Tee hee hee, ^+^ continue soon again please, I love your great work!! ^i^

I am leaving a review behind because I am about to send you a long e-mail about what I think of your story and I want you to know that I read it.

Sorry to bother you, but I was wondering when you were going to update. I love this fic and I've been anticipating the next chapter for a couple of months now. Please update soon.

Okay then, thanks for the warning :)

It's not fair, the story seems so interesting yet there are no more updates. I want more. Please.....

I really enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for you to update. Please keep up the great work.